do you agree or disagree with the following statement? young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future the society as a whole.
There is no shortage of debate that young people have a vital role in their society. Some people believe that young people don't attend their society decisions and they have less effect on them. While others don't think so. If I were to tell my notion, I would definitely tell that some of them are indifferent but others have a significant role in their society and we cannot tell a generic sentence about them.
To begin with, one should take into account the fact that because of the hard economic situation a considerable number of young people are trying to work hard to earn money. Parents cannot afford their adolescent so they have to work full time to afford their hang out, travel and education so they don't have enough energy and time to participate in their social events and get information about their country. my notion on this issue has been profoundly influenced by my personal experience. Following my graduation from university, I was hired in a company and I had to work 10 hours per day so when I came back home I feel lethargy. As a result, I could not study my country's plan and I didn't have enough energy to participate in social groups. Had I spent less time in my work, I would definitely contribute to a social group that made me an effective person for my society.
Another remarkable reason is that although a profuse number of young people suffer from economic stagnation, many of them not only participate in their society but also have a crucial role in their country. Actually, it depends on their talent and their effort during their life. If you study well and feel a responsibility about your country, you will catch a significant role in your society which allows you to determine your society's future. Our president is a compelling example of this kind of person. He has graduated from high school many years ago and following his graduation, he became a politic leader in his university and made some important decisions for his university because of his social talent in making communication with people and his intelligence in the policy. So he became a candidate with a brilliant resume and eventually became president.
in conclusion, There is an abundant number of young people who have a crucial role in their society because of their efforts and their talents. However, there are some of them who don't contribute to their society because of their hard life situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, so, well, while, i feel, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 68.0 43.0788530466 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1999.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 419.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77088305489 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63204383992 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482100238663 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 653.4 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.3773969523 48.9658058833 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.055555556 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2777777778 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05555555556 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184700520773 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621218256987 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596107614703 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121513065439 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441280297073 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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