Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to work as a team than as an individual to succeed.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There is no doubt that there are some great people behind one's success. Some people succeed by just working alone and do not want any kind of interruption, while others do not trust themselves and think that working in a group can give them a way to succeed. In my opinion, working with others as a team is key to success. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, working and engaging in a group with different people will give you more ideas and concepts behind the project one is working on. Many individuals' brains work at a different pace, which can foster more thoughts. My school project is a great example of this. A couple of years ago, at my university, I was given the option to work on the science project alone or in a group. I was opt-out for a group. I made a group with three of my friends and started to work on the project. Unbelievably, our project was done in a week only because of meeting every day in person gives us power and excitement to complete our project before time. As a result, everybody put their thoughts and concepts by giving various ideas on how to build this project successfully and on time. Thus, working and supporting each other by working as a strong team not only gave us success in our project but also acclaims from our professor by finishing on time. Furthermore, teamwork boosts your confidence and take you to a higher level. For instance, last summer in a university presentation, I was assigned to a group of four people. We all were ready to give our presentation but I was nervous about presenting my part in front of hundreds of students. It goes without saying that my group was full of energy which gave me support and confidence by saying that I can do this by giving my best and they made me sure that if I do anything wrong, I always would have their back, Consequently, I gave my best and got a second position which also enhanced my grade. Not only this, but I was also offered by another medical university to work there as a lecturer. As you see, it did not only gave me confidence but also took me to another great level only because of my group encouragement.
To sum up, working in a group can give you success in every step of your life. This is because team members will put different ideas and concepts to make a project better and also a team can boost your confidence when you start to give up on yourself.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 163, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'brain'.
Suggestion: brain
...ect one is working on. Many individuals brains work at a different pace, which can fos...
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Line 3, column 1678, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'did' requires base form of the verb: 'give'
Suggestion: give
...a lecturer. As you see, it did not only gave me confidence but also took me to anoth...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, second, so, thus, while, for instance, i feel, kind of, no doubt, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1991.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 452.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40486725664 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54918240199 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.464601769912 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 630.0 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.9495630791 48.9658058833 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8095238095 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5238095238 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61904761905 5.45110844103 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157449822237 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543855051632 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503942649056 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130172998195 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0158025665466 0.0645574589148 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.24 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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