In the hectic life of today, there are a number of incidents which are occurring all around the world. Regarding this issue, some people believe that it is significant to know about those occurrences, while some others disagree and claim that it is a sheer waste of time. Although it seems plausible at first glimpse that the first idea carries more weight since we will have more information, I would counter this point of view due to some reasons. I will enlarge on what I mean in the following paragraphs.
First and foremost, as humans' minds have a limited capacity, it is not essential to fill it with news of current events when it has no impact on their lives. To be more exact, people have to assign their brain abilities to some specific tasks which can help them to make a better life or a bigger profit. In stark contrast, thinking about distinctive types of everyday events makes people's minds too tired, so they cannot focus on their own duties. Take my cousin, for illustration. While he has always been seen as a person who has a considerable amount of information about world's news, he does not make a successful living and his wife is fed up with broke all the time. As a result, being aware of occurrences happening around the world does not make any change in people's lives, thus it is not noteworthy to follow them.
The other reason which deserves some words here lies in the fact that knowing about the latest incidents can make humans nervous, and do not help them lead a happy life. So, it is immaterial to have a vast amount of information about them. To clarify this point, bad events have been an inseparable part of humans' lives. Owing to unprecedented burgeoning of technology in recent decades, it is more noticeable nowadays. In addition, those incidents have always had bad impacts on people's minds and make them upset since humans feel sympathy for others. Consequently, by being aware of traumatic events, people not only can do nothing, but also put themselves under the pressure of nervousness.
To sum up, given the facts that events occurring around the world do not have any effect on humans’ lives and the latest incidents only make people sad and they can do nothing about them, I am of the opinion that it is not significant to be aware of recent events which has no impact on people’s daily lives.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, regarding, so, thus, while, i mean, in addition, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1933.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 415.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6578313253 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52659076795 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527710843373 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 612.9 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.0441298468 48.9658058833 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.705882353 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4117647059 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.29411764706 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8709677419 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159719231453 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523052972201 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397952123023 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108280768831 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0243576271826 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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