Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is important to know what is happening around the world, even if it does not affect your personal lives.
Awareness and caution are the most important pillars of each society in today's world. Due to the fact we live in a fast-paced and chaotic world, it is important for us to follow the latest updated news around the world. A controversial question that is often raised regarding to this issue is whether important for people to know about the events that happening around the world even these events will not affected their lives or not. Some people possess the conviction that this knowledge is irrelevant for their lives and they should pay more attention to events that occurred in their nation, whereas I think knowing worldwide news is fruitful for our perspective. To substantiate my point of view, the following paragraphs represent a cursory glance at the most important reasons.
The first reason coming to mind elucidating my standpoint is that when we get and receive the world's news, we can elaborate our knowledge and tackle issues that may occur for us in semi-similar situations. We can increase our understanding that will result in prosperity. Imagining the people from two different countries in the pandemic. I can remember that I followed up the latest news of China's policies and disciples for overcoming the covid-19. They were beneficial and effective crossed the board.
The second rationale reason behind this opinion is rooted in the fact that by following other countries' news we can increase our sense of responsibilities. If the people of other nations are in hard circumstances and situations, we can help them and improve our social interactions and reflections. Imagining the Ukraine and Russia war. There are many people in Europe who sent gifts for Ukrainian' children this christmas. They helped them and improve their social cycle.
In brief, due to the aforementioned reasons, I think knowing about other country's news is beneficial for us because it improves our knowledge about their decisions and policies and, in particular, it will help us to improve our social cycle. It is anticipated that when we use the news we can build a better society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 407, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'affect'
Suggestion: affect
...nd the world even these events will not affected their lives or not. Some people possess...
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Line 3, column 95, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
...int is that when we get and receive the worlds news, we can elaborate our knowledge an...
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Line 5, column 95, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...ted in the fact that by following other countries news we can increase our sense of respo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, regarding, second, so, whereas, i think, in brief, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1749.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 344.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08430232558 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84500067961 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514534883721 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.1972254064 48.9658058833 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.882352941 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2352941176 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.70588235294 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12400403266 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0416836780225 0.076458572812 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647423684637 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0719293821429 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0917889576149 0.0645574589148 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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