Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
As you know, technology is dramatically advancing at a past pace and influencing our daily life. The question arise from here is wheter we should keep up with the events happening around the world. It is my firm belief that we should care about contemperory news regardless of its importance, and in what follows I will elobrate on my viewpoint.
To begin with, in nowadays, one sholud have to be educated in not only academic fields, also should have to take attentions to the surrounding in order to be well-informed and make a rational decision. It is not uncommon that anyone get informed of everything with edge-cutting advent of technology. Thus, we have to use this benefits to our adventeges. I believe my personal experience can supports this claim. When I was interviewed to get in a interniship program, a interviewers asked me of my personal opinion on economic effects from Chinese and United States trade war eventhough my major was law. My daily rountine of checking news on BBC, Forge and several news agency allowed to answer the question,
Another reason is one can easily learn new language by watching news, and reading newspaper and atricles in a foreign language. No one can argue that learning a foreign language is challenging. What I believes is getting used to a certain language is most essential part of learning. To this, we should have to hear a tons of native speakers' conversations through news or any way one prefers. In my experience, watching ESPN, BBC and so on is crucial way enhance my english vocubulary, listening, and other skills.
To sum up, all of aforemost mentioned reasons support the idea that it is true to constantly caring about news all over the world is definitely useful for everyone. It is mainly due to the fact that its advantages such as predicting possible obscure, having a solid information about your surruondings, and a helpful resource as learning new languages.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...claim. When I was interviewed to get in a interniship program, a interviewers ask...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a interviewer' or simply 'interviewers'?
Suggestion: a interviewer; interviewers
...viewed to get in a interniship program, a interviewers asked me of my personal opinion on econ...
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Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun news seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'some news'.
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Suggestion: believe
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...arning. To this, we should have to hear a tons of native speakers conversations throug...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, thus, well, such as, you know, it is true, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1609.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 327.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92048929664 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93642322205 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617737003058 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1348246473 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.266666667 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145572515447 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0459009468318 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437010276244 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0948234077821 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634875110692 0.0645574589148 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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