Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
No one can deny that there are both positive and negative aspects of making history course a mondatory. If I were forced to choose, I would definitely agree with this idea. It is my firm belief that its pros weighs cons for a number of reasons, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, a country can develop patriot in younger generations, and understood them previous nation's sacrifice and glory by providing them with history class. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. When I was studying in Mongolian National University, every students have to take any Mongolian History Course or Mongolian History class to graduate. As a requirement, I chose the class called The Brief History of Mongolia. As a result, it helped me to understand how important the independence, culture of our own and freedom are, and inspired me to choose my future career as a cultural heritage profession.
Secondly, nations can preserve their own cultural characteristics in fast globalizing world with people who posesses more knowledge, and appreciation of their own culture and history. As you know, globalization is growing at a fast past pace and influencing our daily life and also differences between countries are blurred and dramatically influenced. Drawing from my own experience, our team made a conclusion that younger generations are extremely important when it comes to the future culture while when we conducted a research. Moreover, the university students were the most effective among the kindergardeners, elementary schoolers, secondary schoolers, and higher levels. The reason for this is university students are more matured and have more sense of responsibilty to the matter. Consequently, university students are most likely to be effective in all different kind of fields.
In short, all of aforementioned reasons lead us to draw conclusion that having a history class requiremts is beneficial to both government and individuals. It is mainly due to the fact that the requiremts supports nations policy to protect its own culture and make new generations aware of its importance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, in short, kind of, you know, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1848.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 351.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26495726496 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1252613303 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575498575499 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 597.6 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7789002011 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.5 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9375 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172357030298 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547527135414 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419751872754 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0939539643755 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220786136665 0.0645574589148 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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