Tpo-50 Integrated essay
The passage mainly gave readers reasons why asteroids can be the best colonization mean for humans. On the other hand, the lecturer opposes the points made in the reading passage by giving his solid arguments.
To begin with, the reading states that transferring to asteroid is easier, affordable, and possible in shipping a large number of things due to its lover gravity. On the other hand, the professor emphasizes that habiting on asteroids have serious health risk such as lose muscle density can result in low muscle density, and low bone density. This directly contradicts what the passage indicates.
Next, the passage says that a colony in an asteroid can be beneficial in economy and especially in mining market beacause of its rich in certain valuable metals. However, the lecturer talks about mining in asteroid actually less advantagiuos than expected in the reading. The reason for this is the cost like transfortation, advanced technological equipment most likely to raise raw materials price in market which prompt low selling rates in market place.
Finally, departing and landing space actually not like that simple as stated in the reading. Also, it is not cheaper and convienent. According to the professor, he points that distance between the earth and asteriod is not canstant due to its periodical movement. In respect of this idea, asteroid can be close to the earth at a certain point, but it will eventually move and be far from the earth. This will make it harder to return to the earth or shipping.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is important to know about events happening around the world even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 76
- It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends 63
- It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends 63
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement In the past young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives Use specific reasons and examples to su 80
- The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 64, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing states that transferring to asteroid is easier, affordable, and possible in s...
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Line 2, column 114, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...r, affordable, and possible in shipping a large number of things due to its lover gravity. On the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, however, so, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 12.0772626932 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 22.412803532 76% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 30.3222958057 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1276.0 1373.03311258 93% => OK
No of words: 254.0 270.72406181 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02362204724 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66650261963 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 145.348785872 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59842519685 0.540411800872 111% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 419.366225166 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8616390988 49.2860985944 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1538461538 110.228320801 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 21.698381199 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.06452816374 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0879355674563 0.272083759551 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0289609825722 0.0996497079465 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0265364494566 0.0662205650399 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0522203791889 0.162205337803 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00884748713203 0.0443174109184 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.3589403974 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.8541721854 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.2367328918 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.42419426049 105% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 63.6247240618 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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