Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The ability of acquiring information has been more and more emphasized, and nowadays a discussion over whether people should learn about world news that are irrelevant to their daily lives has been triggered. In my opinion, such events enable people to relieve pressures and can be vital for people living in foreign lands where news happen.
What should be prioritized is that people can use their imaginations about things happening around the world, which can help them relax. According to the newest report from Peking University, people always show more interests in their unfamiliar things, when people read novel things, their brain would secret a protein that trigger their imagination, helping them focus on novelties instead of their stressful daily work. For instance, several months ago a spacecraft was launched towards the Mars by Tesla. This piece of news had nothing to do with my parents who are both Mandarin teachers. However, they have kept talking about this issue for weeks during our meals. They talked about possibility of human beings living in other planets in the future, and their imagination about travelling through nebulas and galaxies was so romantic that it helped them forget about their daily life for seconds. Their fantasies are based on unknown territories, which can relax themselves.
Meanwhile, the spread of information of oversea countries can be extremely significant for people living in there. From the statistic from United Nations, there are about thirty countries cannot afford to broadcast their information to external world, and all of them are suffering from poverty and diseases. What they can do is to expose their troubles to people around the world, which could cost the local government one to two years of savings. If the information has been successfully delivered, their lives would be saved, if failed, things would be worse. For example, there are many people in Africa that are impoverished and disadvantaged, millions of them are dying from some curable illnesses. If their circumstances can be propagated effectively, more people would realize their difficulties and more money could be raised to buy some developed vaccines to save their lives. For people from those countries, the delivery of such a piece of news represents invaluable survival hope for them.
Admittedly, knowing about what is happening around the world may have a few disadvantages. For example, it may take up too much time that can be used to study or work. However, the advantages of reading such news above outweigh its disadvantages.
Inconclusion, people should also pay more attentions to international news, because that news can help people relieve pressures and can be vital for people living in undeveloped countries.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, second, so, while, for example, for instance, talking about, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2239.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 425.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26823529412 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69392139023 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 682.2 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2380053195 48.9658058833 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.842105263 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3684210526 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15789473684 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0926599186177 0.236089414692 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0389588242398 0.076458572812 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460395952167 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0607785869019 0.150856017488 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386260805227 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 10.9000537634 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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