Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In today's progressive and sophisticated world where we live, no one can turn a blind eye to the significant effects of news about the world on their lives. Contrary to the opinion of many people that it is not useful for people to know about events happening around the world, I firmly believe that if people know news about all of the world's events, these events will affect people's daily life. In the following paragraphs, I will cogently explain my reasons to justify my viewpoints.
To begin with, if people know about the world's events, they can acquire new information. In other words, when people follow news about events happening around the world, they improve and expands their knowledge about the different fields. So, they learn new lessons and use that in their daily life. For instance, the head coach of the national team that has a world cup match. They don't know about changes in the new method of the style of football in the world, So they can use technology to know about events happening in the football style, and they use this method for improving their teams. Hence, if people know the world's event, they will improve and expand their knowledge about any field.
Secondly, when one country involved in different problems such as floods or war, they know about that and can help that country. To be more specific, when people of a country deal with unexpected events, people can help them by financial aids, or give them their experience. For example, when I was a child, there were severe floods in our country, and we suffered financial and humans losses in our country and needed help. And, other countries lend money to my nation, so the government used that money to build our houses. As a matter of fact, the more people know about events happening around the world, the more country help each other in a bad situation.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that it is important to know the world's events and more beneficial for the people.
People should be aware of world events, not only improve and extend their information and knowledge but also can help each other when they deal with different obstacles.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
... their teams. Hence, if people know the worlds event, they will improve and expand the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a matter of fact, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1776.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 372.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77419354839 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34416617205 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.451612903226 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 525.6 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.267688488 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0625 5.45110844103 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268913785689 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107814277976 0.076458572812 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711691041327 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158315171886 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0855394698937 0.0645574589148 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.