Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
TPO30
Without any shadow of doubt, occupation is not only the inextricable part of the life of every individual, but also the fabric of the society. Should people realize the importance of this element on the life, they will ponder over the quality and quantity of it much more scrupulously. Some people inclined towards working less days in a week, while others believe that it could have catastrophic impact on the economic cultivation of society. I do find the idea of the former group more in accordance with that of mine. To support my stand, in the course of this essay, I will aptly substantiate my viewpoints.
To begin with, having more free days during a week provides an opportunity to people to be more energetic and active in the working place. In fact under this situation people have adequate time to attend the other interesting activities and hobbies. Having hobbies beside the career tasks actually increase the quality of life. Imagine individuals who spend whole of their time in the working place, without any spare time to go to cinema, to go hiking or even to go recreational centers. How their boss could expect they be active and enthusiastic in their job? Were he realistic enough, he would admit that his employee need to a favorable climate for both life and work. To illustrate my point, I would like to mention some statistics results. The psychological results of a survey which is conducted recently in my country, depicts that economic prospering of society closely tied to the level of activities of the community, which is directly linked to the satisfaction of employees.
Another reason which deserves to say some words here is that working three days a week avoid of wasting time, and gives the chance to save money. Obviously, commuting takes not only amount of cost but also a great deal of time everyday. Although, some company has the commuting services for their employees, spending the time in the bus or train or other transportation system would be boring. As an example, several years ago, when I worked, most of my workable and useful times in the begging of the day spent while I was waiting to the bus at the bus station, or in the way of the work. In top of that, at the evening when I wanted to came back home, there was a terrible traffic jam, which always made me crazy.
In brief, by contemplating the aforementioned facts, one soon realizes decreasing the working days in a week has more benefit and sways to work more hours during limited working days. Since, I strongly subscribe to the perspective that working five days in a week is not logical and reasonable.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 324, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun days is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...y. Some people inclined towards working less days in a week, while others believe th...
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Line 5, column 228, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...t of cost but also a great deal of time everyday. Although, some company has the commuti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, so, thus, while, in brief, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 52.1666666667 142% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2171.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 455.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77142857143 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61852021839 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67729476479 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553846153846 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 695.7 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1569926512 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.55 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23129736493 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652476035179 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664776875344 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148595201337 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558190261436 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 86.8835125448 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.