Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In a world where people easily obtain different opinion on the internet, it is not only important to carefully use the idea, but it is also important to think of how the ideas have been derived. Throughout history, many nations through conquering and intermixing with one another introduced their philosophies into other cultures. since every idea must be affected by thousands of other cultures, the given topic "it is more important for governments to spend money to improve internet access than to improve public transportation." can also be interpreted as many different ways as the number of people on this Earth. By carefully interpreting the question, I have analyzed the problem and have agreed with two reasons. first, investing to internet can make a lot of money and related jobs in society. second, internet makes people's life more convenient in society. To begin with,it is important to spend money to improve internet access than to improve public transportation because investing to internet can make a lot of money and related jobs in society. nowadays our society is based on internet and technologies combined with internet are being developed from many industrial sites. As several technologies are developed with internet, there are many jobs which are related to internet. Regarding related jobs and making money in society, it has more benefits to spend money to improve internet access. For example, out government released the research about the prominent jobs in the future. research indicate that about two thousands jobs related to internet will be made after five years from now. also research indicates that these jobs will decrease the rate of unemployment and give more value to society. through above the example, it is important to invest to improve internet access than to improve public transportation.In addition, it is better to spend money to improve internet access because internet makes people's life more convenient in society. we can easily access the internet with a few clicks and get a lot of information from internet. when we compare to society which do not has internet, nowadays we thrive fast and convenient life. since internet makes our lives more convenient, government should invest money to improve internet access for society. For example, when I was a student, I lived in countryside. there are no private institutions for study. So I had no opportunity to go private institutions. but when I became a high school student, due to internet I could take lessons at home without going institution. it was a great chance for me and this was only possible with help from the internet. it has such a huge influence on me that I think that it is better to spend money to improve internet access than public transportation. As societies develop, the paradigm can shift, ideas try to stay alive, adapt, and grow over time to meet the need of contemporary societies. The given topic "it is more important for governments to spend money to improve internet access than to improve public transportation." can also change as the society changes. however, as things stand, I will agree for two reasons to meet the need of the community I have experienced. first, investing to internet can make a lot of money and related jobs in society. second, internet makes people's life more convenient in society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, regarding, second, so, for example, i think, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 87.0 52.1666666667 167% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2815.0 1977.66487455 142% => OK
No of words: 552.0 407.700716846 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09963768116 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84713113593 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93279533271 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.403985507246 0.524837075471 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 919.8 618.680645161 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3865673503 48.9658058833 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.535714286 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64285714286 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 5.5376344086 397% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.379496639143 0.236089414692 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117384328637 0.076458572812 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113792111845 0.0737576698707 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.379496639143 0.150856017488 252% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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