Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
Keeping old relationships with our friends is an important consideration in every ones life. Some people believe we should keep old friends than making a new relationship with new friends. As a matter of fact, i agree with this opinion, and i think old friends have major impacts in our lives. having trust to people around us and realibility to them are important issue in today's world. Looking more precisely to these impacts will help to understand why we should keep our old friends.
First of all, we should find someone can trust him among our friends. As virtue of fact, we can't tell everything to our parents or even our brothers or sisters. Friends have a different story in every ones life. Old friends have this feature because we know them appropriately and we lived with them for many years. In contrast, when we make a new friendship with someone, we manner cautiously with each other and we try to find a way to speak with each other. So in this situation we can't tell them everything.
Secondly, each person need a friend who can help him in difficult situation. For example, suppose, you have some trouble with your family and have argue with them. In this situation, you tired of everything and you need a person to speak to him just for caliming down. Old friend is the best choice for you. You can say why you have argue with them. explain it and even have a fun with him about this arguement. You feel better after that and you can make decision wisely.
As above mentioned, keeping our old friends is one of most important things we have in our lives. finding a person can trust him to solve our problems and can talk to him to have a better feeling are positive aspects of having an old friend which can't find these things in persons who newly entered in our lives.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... with new friends. As a matter of fact, i agree with this opinion, and i think ol...
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...of fact, i agree with this opinion, and i think old friends have major impacts in...
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Suggestion: Having
...riends have major impacts in our lives. having trust to people around us and realibili...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...mong our friends. As virtue of fact, we cant tell everything to our parents or even ...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ith each other. So in this situation we cant tell them everything. Secondly, each p...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'argued'.
Suggestion: argued
... some trouble with your family and have argue with them. In this situation, you tired...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'argued'.
Suggestion: argued
...hoice for you. You can say why you have argue with them. explain it and even have a f...
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Suggestion: Finding
... important things we have in our lives. finding a person can trust him to solve our pro...
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
...e aspects of having an old friend which cant find these things in persons who newly ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, second, secondly, so, for example, i think, in contrast, as a matter of fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 325.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51384615385 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38020236821 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.470769230769 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 443.7 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.5111672116 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.35 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284350097809 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105261158658 0.076458572812 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0849311033447 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186934899454 0.150856017488 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105763946262 0.0645574589148 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 11.7677419355 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.62 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 86.8835125448 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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