Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
family:"Times new Roman",serif; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times new Roman"">Nowadays, exist innumerable ways to know new people, making friendships more ephemeral. Whether is more essential to keep ancient friends than to meet new ones, though, is a matter of intense debate. As far as I am concerned, I firmly believe that a friend who has been with you for years, is a valuable and rare jewel that you must conserve. this position is based on two main reasons that will be analyzed thoroughly below.
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family:"Times new Roman",serif; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times new Roman"">Firstly, a proved friend, who has been with you through thick and thin, he leaves to be a stranger and become part of your family. it means that, when you live positive and negative situations with someone, it creates bonds that unbreakable and arise feelings so solid that are at the same level of those that you have for a brother or a sister. For example, when I was in the university, I had a friend whom I was inseparable. then, one day he told me that he was moving to another country, owing to her family's economic situation. The news was so impactful, that I had uncountable issues to pass that semester, due to I felt that I was losing a brother.
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family:"Times new Roman",serif; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times new Roman"">Secondly, a old friend knows you well and accept you with your strengthens and weaknesses and they do not have second intentions. when you know someone new, you do not really know the reasons which that person is approaching you. For instance, when I was a freshman university student, I lived an experience which exemplify extraordinarily well this affirmation. one day, I knew a guy who apparently wanted to be my friend. then, one day I receive a warning from an ancient friend about the real intentions of this guy, which were to gain my trust and borrow an important amount of money and never return it back.
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family:"Times new Roman",serif; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times new Roman"">In summation, i am of the opinion that the old friends are so vital in our life, that worth any effort in order to keep it. this is owing to an old friend is more a member of your own family, than just someone known, and they are always direct and clear without hidden aims.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, for instance, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 25.0 11.0286738351 227% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2311.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 399.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.79197994987 4.8611393121 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 5.73157039369 2.67179642975 215% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52380952381 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 690.3 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 89.8210025551 48.9658058833 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.4375 100.406767564 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9375 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8125 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 25.0 5.5376344086 451% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141697908145 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648337518923 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514759658746 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0926386620192 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584217049725 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 11.7677419355 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 58.1214874552 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.6 10.9000537634 152% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.