Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for the government to spend money on art museums and concert halls than on recreational facilities such as swimming pools and playgrounds.
It is not always easy to choose what is more important than the other thing and worth the government funding. However, from my point of view art museums and concert halls are prior to recreational facilities for receiving the government funding. I believe so for three main reasons consisting preserving history, having quality entertainment, and tourism.
First of all, to preserve a country’s legacy and history can be considered as an important reason for assigning government funding to the art museums and concert halls. As our ancestors had tried to preserve as much the history and tradition of our country as they could, we should do the same. Art museums represent who we used to be and who we really are right now so it is important to keep them intact for the next generation. In addition, recreation of some art masterpieces in concert halls is what worth preserving and fighting for.
Secondly, art museums and concert halls are the most quality entertainment one can have. This hectic life forces us to look for more and more entertainment each and every day. Although there are lots of other options for having fun and enjoying your leisure time, making the best use out of it and having the high quality time should be the goal. Art museums and concert halls are the options contributing to upgrade the quality of your entertainment time as well as being instructive.
Finally, tourism is one of the strongest reasons why the government should spend more money on museums and concert halls. One of the most important industries with a growing interest on in every country is tourism. Not only tourists will bring money to the country, but also they help with the picture of the country all over the world. While tourists spent huge amount of money on their vacation to a country, they expect to see inspiring art museums and concert halls and these are what might attract them to come back and visit your country some other time again.
To sum up, it is important for the government to spend more money on art museums and concert halls rather than recreational facilities. However, there are lots of reasons for this, I hold three main reasons for my opinion; preserving history, having quality entertainment, and tourism.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, well, while, in addition, as well as, first of all, to sum up, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1885.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 382.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93455497382 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67865396864 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.458115183246 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 562.5 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6724664654 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.882352941 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4705882353 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.88235294118 5.45110844103 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338171195975 0.236089414692 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128178357461 0.076458572812 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102983799574 0.0737576698707 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211835596996 0.150856017488 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531480574466 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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