Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Friends in our life depends what kind of life we live, so making friends is indeed an important part of our life. The time we know our friends is not the correct criterion to value a friend how it is important to us. Making new friends is the same important as keeping old friends.
Old friends are meaningful to us for the days we go through together. We enjoyed the same movies and hung out for happiness. They helped you when you were in trouble and they comforted you when you were in a bad mood. The days we spent together are so happy that we think we can be friends forever. But things always change in an unexpected way and you cannot imagine what will happen in the next few minutes.
Old friends cannot always accompany you when you go to a new place. In modern society, most people have to go to the university which is not built in their hometown. You and your friends cannot always be together if you two choose different schools. Making new friends is helpful for you to adjust to a new environment. If you move to a new city or a new country, making some local friends is the most urgent thing to fit in the new environment. The places we live are changing, so the friends we make are changing. If we do not make new friends, we will be locked in a small community which is contact a little with the world outside and we may not keep in with changes.
Also, old friends used to be your new friends. A baby who is just born definitely has no friends and nobody is born with so many friends. You can do things which you have done with your old friends again by making new friends and you may feel various with the times you have done before. Then those new friends become old friends who are valuable in your life.
Making new friends is as important as keeping old friends for new friends will become old friends in the future and you need them when you move to a place.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 324, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an unexpected way" with adverb for "unexpected"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...iends forever. But things always change in an unexpected way and you cannot imagine what will happen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 360.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.25277777778 4.8611393121 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21658834448 2.67179642975 83% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.427777777778 0.524837075471 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 458.1 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8817737901 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.55 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.85 5.45110844103 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.396886388903 0.236089414692 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159012746823 0.076458572812 208% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110248415674 0.0737576698707 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.28005553804 0.150856017488 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104449075158 0.0645574589148 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 58.1214874552 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.07 10.9000537634 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.2 8.01818996416 77% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 86.8835125448 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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