There is no shortage of debate about whether the land is used for human needs of to save the endanger animals. In my opinion, I firmly believe that it is worthwhile to use land for the people in the Earth rather than to use for saving endanger animals. I feel this way for several reasons, which I will explore in the following essay. To begin with, we know human beings are the most important creature in the Earth because without human beings it is very hard for nature to exist. They play vital role in balancing the environment. For example, in my village people have used land for the farming which helps them to produce food. They have also built houses for their settlement. In addition, they constructed factories for the preparing food from the raw material. As a result, Environment of our society is pleasant and balanced. Secondly, it is not necessary for the human beings to teach to save the animals. People have knowledge and they have the sense to protect the animals which are rare in the Earth. My own experience is compelling example of this. I am so emotional that I have feelings towards animals. I love animals at home to which I love most. To save animals lives at first I have to exist in the nature. I uses land for the different purpose; however, I have also thought about the animal which are going to be extinct. So I have dog at home. I am conscious about the animal life. I cook food and feed them. I feel that like human beings, animal has also right to live in the Earth. This example illustrates that Human beings has sense of humor to save all the animals which are found in the Earth. Finally, people can use land in proper way; they know the value of all the creature in the nature. Moreover, people in the Earth play major role to save the animals. People can put certain land for the lives of the animals. For instance, in my village people uses certain part of land for their personal purpose and remaining parts of land is used for saving endanger animals. People can figure out the land which is useful to the animals. There is one land which has environment suitable for the adaption for tiger; people do not use that land for their personal interest. This shows that all the land cannot be used by the people. To sum up, the evidences that i mentions in the above passages are strong enough to convince the statement that I agree with. This is because human beings know the value of animals, which part of the land is suitable for the adaption of animals, and are more emotional to the animals. These are the reasons which are convincing with the statement.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 90, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...land is used for human needs of to save the endanger animals. In my opinion, I firmly believ...
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Line 1, column 895, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'saving'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'teach' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: saving
...necessary for the human beings to teach to save the animals. People have knowledge and ...
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Line 1, column 1228, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'use'
Suggestion: use
... first I have to exist in the nature. I uses land for the different purpose; however...
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Line 1, column 1352, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'dogged'.
Suggestion: dogged
...hich are going to be extinct. So I have dog at home. I am conscious about the anima...
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Line 1, column 1430, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...animal life. I cook food and feed them. I feel that like human beings, animal has...
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Line 1, column 2286, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'i' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'mention'
Suggestion: mention
...people. To sum up, the evidences that i mentions in the above passages are strong enough...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, i feel, in addition, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2126.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 475.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47578947368 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66845742379 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30261708266 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.408421052632 0.524837075471 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 689.4 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5219117392 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.5806451613 100.406767564 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3225806452 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61290322581 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 11.8709677419 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0673768893815 0.236089414692 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0227806322832 0.076458572812 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0308274721366 0.0737576698707 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0673768893815 0.150856017488 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 11.7677419355 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.11 10.9000537634 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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