Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The budget that allocate to different parts of society improvement is a matter of dispute among people in any societies. Many believe that it is far better to spend money on public transportation since today, human beings most suffer from any kinds of environmental pollution, the most important of which is air pollution caused by automobiles. However, many people have the conviction that spending money on internet is more beneficial to society while it affects many aspects of society. I am unanimous with the later group for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, internet provides people with a wide range of amenities. Development of internet will directly affect on the use of private cars or other forms of transportation. People who have access to internet prefer to do most of their needs and tasks through internet instead of getting car and do them in person.For example many reservation they made from tickets for concert to food delivery from restaurants. Therefore, using internet not only eases the way of doing tasks, but it affect the environment in a positive way as well.
Secondly, internet contribute to widen people’s horizon, which will influence profoundly on society. Today, people spend most of their times on internet; Thus,if the government invest on it, will lose nothing. for example, people now has been more aware of environmental issues which would never been before. For example, now people can read a variety of papers on internet from psychological to biological and etc. Therefore investing on improvement of the internet will highly affect on society in a positive way.
In conclusion, according to what I mentioned above, I strongly agree with investing on the internet. Because of the effects it has on widening people's knowledge and also because it eases doing many tasks which is leading to less use of transportation means of any form.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1620.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 316.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12658227848 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.877158386 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556962025316 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.890981927 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0666666667 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 5.45110844103 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229812615619 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075944429995 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0261613059247 0.0737576698707 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134972771615 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331619444406 0.0645574589148 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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