Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, with the economic recession which is commonplace in every society, the importance of spending restricted budget of governments in a wise way is more conspicuous. Internet was a revoloutionary invent that is essential in today's life, and also it is crystal clear that public transportation is of great consequence in any country. As far as allocating budget to these fields is concerned some are ofthe opinion that governments should assign more money on the public transportion, while others believe otherwise. I, for one, subscribe to the first idea. The reasons why I believe so are manifold- three of which, however, are of great consequences: traffic jam, enviornment protection, and developing country.
To begin with, given the consumerist disposition of human being no room is left for squandering the most precious gift of life-time.But, nowadays we are witnessing that people spend lots of their time in the disruptive traffic jams which not only takes much of their time, but also it makesthem nervous and causes psychological difficulties in the society. For instance, seeing a road rage in the street every day is not a srange things to occur. One remedy to this defect has to do with strengthening the public transportation system, like trains and buses. That being so, improving public tranportation will be significantly beneficial for all people.
Second,air pollution is another problem that emenates from this truth that in absence of a proper public transportation system people have to use their own cars. Therefore, promoting this system has considerable consequences in decreasing the amount of pollutants which cars, used by individuals, release to our sorroundings.
Last but not least, public transportation system is one of the crucial infrastructures as far as the development of a country is concerned. For example, we can see easily that all the developed countries have powerful transportation systems which enables them to keep tune to unprecedented rate of developing of these days. Hence, public transportation is a mandatory factor which can also guarantee the advancement of the society in other aspects like economy.
All in all, taken into account what was already mentioned, I do believe that spending money on public tranportation is of more importance than internet access on the ground that it will reduces traffic and air pollution and also will results in development of country. I hope someday our authorities concerned with public transportation come to their senses and take proper measures to fortify it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: reduce
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'result'
Suggestion: result
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, second, so, then, therefore, while, as to, for example, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.0752688172 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2161.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 405.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33580246914 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22319743059 2.67179642975 121% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562962962963 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 676.8 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.4511133695 48.9658058833 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.0625 100.406767564 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3125 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5625 5.45110844103 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191508134526 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601698241125 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425284332953 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102147847843 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540484879797 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 11.7677419355 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 58.1214874552 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 10.9000537634 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 86.8835125448 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.