Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

Essay topics:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to

improve public transportation.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Currently there is a widespread belief that the government should spend more money to improve transportation instead of to improve the internet access. From my perspective, however, it is a better strategy to spend money on the internet.
In the first place, internet has brought us so much convenience and it will be used in a wider field in the future. However, in some poorer area, some people still can not have stable access to the internet, therefore they can not enjoy the convenience, and some of them are left behind the society. For example, when the pandemic broke out, students had to stay home and had online courses. But some students who live in the countryside do not have access to the internet, therefore they can not have class for several months. When they returned to school, they felt upset that they were not able to catch up the teacher. Internet is playing an important part in our lives, and it will become even more important in the future, so the government should definitely spend the money on the regions that has weak internet access.
Furthermore, public transportation may not be so important in the future because with the development of internet, more and more people can work at their own place. In the past, people have to go to different place like factories and office to work, so transportation is important because it can influence many people's daily life. But nowadays, a variety of new jobs come into being, and they do not need people to go to another place to work. For instance, my sister used to work in a school and she had to take a subway everyday. She often complain that the government should build more lines because it is too crowded. However, her opinion has changed recently, because now the school is encouraging remote learning, so she do not have to go to the workplace anymore. I think in the future there will be more job options that do not require people to commute, therefore the government should not spend too much money on it.
In conclusion, internet will play an increasingly important part in people’s life, while public transportation will not be that important in the future, so the government should spend more money on improving the internet access.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'to people'?
Suggestion: to people
...s come into being, and they do not need people to go to another place to work. For ins...
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Line 3, column 522, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...n a school and she had to take a subway everyday. She often complain that the government...
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Line 3, column 542, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'She' must be used with a third-person verb: 'complains'.
Suggestion: complains
...ad to take a subway everyday. She often complain that the government should build more l...
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Line 3, column 727, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'does'.
Suggestion: does
... is encouraging remote learning, so she do not have to go to the workplace anymore...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in the first place

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1845.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 386.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77979274611 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67622097661 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.461139896373 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 582.3 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1906655859 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.3125 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.125 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8125 5.45110844103 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276938059215 0.236089414692 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10228546264 0.076458572812 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0972680924463 0.0737576698707 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222998766692 0.150856017488 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0779058245225 0.0645574589148 121% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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