It is clearly understood that in such a sophisticated world, is very necessary to know different people with different ideas some people are inclined toward the opinion that is not an important issue, and people should do their work, and do not think about other people life. As far as I am concerned, it is very necessary to know the different ideas, and this could be possible with reading or watching news presented by people whose views are different. In the subsequent paragraph, I will delve into the most outstanding reasons.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that knowing all the views, and recognizing them in people who surround us is very necessary, and is not deniable. The important this fact showed up when people from different ideas want to work with each other, in these circumstances, everyone should accept the opposite idea, and believe each other. When people start knowing each other by reading or watching the news this acceptance could be much easier.
Another reason which should be taken into consideration is that different views sometimes give the ability to choose right between people, for example, my close friend has a different idea, and view with me, but we always try to keep this is relationships keep safe from this differentially. We take with each other about this different view and sometimes learn many things from each other.
The last but not the least point to be mentioned is that the world we live in has enormously changed and if we want to move with these circumstances, we need to adapt ourselves to them. Another example of the variety that is necessary to mention to this is that choosing a president for the government is very dependent on accepting different views. When the president of the country selects from a different party, we need to accept that and deal with his or her.
To put it briefly, if one weighs the merits and demerits of the aforementioned statement, one soon realizes that everyone needs to be more flexible and aware of different views. There is a myriad of other reasons supporting the above statement, which could be mentioned but are not embraced due to the dearth of time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to right'
Suggestion: to right
...ws sometimes give the ability to choose right between people, for example, my close f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, but, first, if, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1797.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 372.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83064516129 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68480837942 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491935483871 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 552.6 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.9945191058 48.9658058833 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.230769231 100.406767564 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6153846154 20.6045352989 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07692307692 5.45110844103 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253627432998 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0932448538619 0.076458572812 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0820298850324 0.0737576698707 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140820079563 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0941958560353 0.0645574589148 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 58.1214874552 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.33 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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