Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important for students to understand ideas and concepts than it is for them to learn facts.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
education is universally recognized as the essential part of human civilization. however, it is unusual for people to reach consensus on the specific education method that should be implemented. Recently, dispute about whether understanding concepts and idea is more important than learning fact has aroused. In my opinion, understanding concepts and idea is more important, and I would delve into the reasons.
To commence with, concepts and idea are more fundamental than the fact itself, which could often be derived from the underlying principles. learning the fact solely is often superficious. For instance, there are many rudimentary principles behind a scientific phenomenon, such as a chemicals reacting under certain circumstances. learning the concepts and idea allows students to understand why and how the reaction happened under these circumstances instead of remembering the fact that the reaction would happen if the criteria are meeted. The former is more fundamental and crucial than the latter.
Secondly, learning concepts and idea not only allows students to understand the fundamental principles behind a fact, but also makes them to draw inference about a similar case. Let's revisit the example of chemical reaction. there are numerous reactions similar to that specific type of reaction, which is infeasible for students to remember all of them. however, students are capable to derive the condition of other reactions if they understand the principles of them.
Despite emphasising the significance of learning concepts and idea, I am not saying that learning facts is not important. facts often serve as examples to demonstrate students the underlying principles. Without learning facts, students would easily get loss in the complicated and abstruse concepts. however, the ultimate purpose of education is to teach the concepts and idea, and teaching fact is only one of the means to achieve this.
To conclude, learning concepts and idea allows students to grasp the fundamental principles and gain the ability of drawing inference about a similar case. Giving the above benefits, we should never undersestimate the significance of learning concepts and idea.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1873.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 335.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59104477612 4.8611393121 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00528086481 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49552238806 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 576.0 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.1946262262 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5789473684 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6315789474 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.31578947368 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346044804826 0.236089414692 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11063084474 0.076458572812 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575194805005 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203158551729 0.150856017488 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397080075744 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 10.9000537634 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.