Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It’s better to relax by watching a movie or reading a book than doing physical exercises
In the modern era, people all around the world are striving to make their lives easier and they need a type of escapism by which they can get a sense of detachment of daily preoccupations and relax. One of the controversial questions is whether people should spend their leisure time watching a movie and reading a book or taking some physical exercise. I strongly believe that it is better to do some exercise rather than other activity and I substantiate my compelling reasons in the following essay.
First, due to the hustle and bustle of the modern lifestyle, people need some activity to relieve their stress. Nowadays, people have the hectic daily schedule which puts a huge strain on their shoulders, so they are under a lot of stress and tension, however, by doing exercise, they can unwind and relax, since during the exercise our brain releases a happiness-related hormone thereby our mind can be free of our problems. Psychologists believe that those people whose jobs are stressful should participate in some physical exercise like yoga because these people are severely vulnerable to heart diseases and heart attacks. My example is the best illustration, years ago, my father was a financial manager in a company. Every month he was under a lot of pressure owing to dealing with a huge amount of money which have to be divided into different parcels. He always terrified that he could not fulfill his responsibility for giving employees’ wages at the right time. His stress level escalated and eventually, he became sick. His doctor said that he should start doing exercise regularly and he mentioned that had he done some exercise earlier, he would not have been susceptible to disease. As a result, according to medical information, it is highly recommended that everybody should allocate time to exercise to maintain their physical health.
Secondly, doing physical exercise can boost people's self-confidence. In modern cities, most people have sedentary activity, and during the day, rarely do they walk or do other activities since they have to sit long hours in front of their computer in the workplace to accomplish their obligations in a stipulated time frame. Thus, they are susceptible to obesity. According to psychologists, fat people are suffering from a lack of self-confidence and self-esteem. However, by taking exercise they can get rid of their extra body fat and keep in shape which leads to being self-confident.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2063.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 405.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09382716049 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92396558802 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558024691358 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 657.0 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.2939288072 48.9658058833 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.352941176 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8235294118 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.47058823529 5.45110844103 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181724868266 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544049283524 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657689725327 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141711480512 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586856365795 0.0645574589148 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 11.7677419355 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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