It is obvious that today with the development of technology, one of the human’s goals is to travel to space and conduct space research. Although spending a lot of money on space explorations will have long-term effects on human life and will increase human’s knowledge about outer space, I strongly believe that it is much better for governments to assign money to other important purposes which will be useful for human beings who currently live on the Earth. In the following paragraphs I will discuss my views using some reasons and examples.
I think that there are more crucial and vital problems all over the world which authorities need to investigate and solve. It is essential that governments allocate a large amount of money to more immediate and urgent matters such as lack of food resources, health services, medical facilities, education, and so on. Therefore, spending money to improve the living conditions of people has top priority over investing a huge amount of money in space research projects. For example, there are many areas around the word in which people do not have access to basic facilities including sufficient food and health care. Thus, government must first try to provide necessary services for these people and invest in improving poor people life.
Moreover, I believe that governments can allot this money to clean the environment instead of funding space explorations. The development of industries has caused destructive damage to the environment. The dirty and polluted environment is the main reasons of most of diseases. In other words, air, soil, water pollution threaten the plants, animals, and human life. Consequently, it is necessary for governments to make a huge investment in keeping the environment clean which will be useful for living organisms’ life and help them to survive. For instance, air pollution has led many people to suffer from heart and lung disease, respiratory disorders, and etc.; hence, governments should pay a lot of attentions to this issued and assign much more money to solve this problem and save the Earth.
Finally, there are many deadly diseases which scientists have not ever found any medicine to cure. As a result, governments can fund scientific institutions in order to have access more facilities to try to find way to cure these diseases.
To sum up, although doing space research will be useful for future generations, it needs an astronomical amount of money. In my point of view, it is critical for governments to spend this money to solve urgent problems that now exist on the Earth. It will not only save beings life but also protect the Earth.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 261, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the diseases') or simply say ''most diseases''.
Suggestion: most of the diseases; most diseases
...uted environment is the main reasons of most of diseases. In other words, air, soil, water pollu...
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Line 5, column 663, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...nd lung disease, respiratory disorders, and etc.; hence, governments should pay a lot of...
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Line 9, column 311, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...beings life but also protect the Earth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, as to, for example, for instance, i think, such as, as a result, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2231.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 436.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11697247706 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81562738197 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520642201835 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 693.9 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.5496621296 48.9658058833 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.421052632 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9473684211 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.10526315789 5.45110844103 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211374974649 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635966209107 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614749348888 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118210745538 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539260166331 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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