Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Leadership comes naturally. One cannot learn how to develop it.
From a general point of view, in today's sophisticated world we observe, people are striving to push forward their community, it is not far-fetched for one to presume that the leaders play a crucial role in all societies’ success. The leaders can control and manage the various members of a group to reach a common aim. One of the controversial questions is whether the aforementioned ability comes naturally or not. I personally reckon that leadership is obtainable and it is not innate. In the following essay, my compelling reasons will be elaborated.
First and foremost, leadership is the ability that people can develop through the training classes, and it can be thought. It is widely accepted that a leader is the one who should have some essential skills such as strong communication, time managing, stress controlling to name of few. people may intrinsically have some of these skills, but they need to class or instructor to help them flourish these abilities, and over the course of time, when they are growing up, they learn how to exploit their skills to lead other people to reach the pinnacle of success. In some cases, some executive experience is acquired by encountering the hurdles, having the ability to surmount them which makes a qualified leader. For example, my brother is 40 years old, and he started mountain climbing when he was a teenager. At first, he always was injured and overwhelmed with a lot of problems that he had to solve solely. Sometimes, he had to cope with such hurdles which might jeopardize his life, for example, once he ended up being lost and fighting with a bear. Over the course of time, he became better and better, and now he is a well-known and experienced leader who can take hundreds of people to tour as a leader. Had not he dealt with these dangerous situations; he would never have been a reliable leader.
Secondly, most leaders are the ones who are educated people, as a result, they have to pass some academic program which has to be developed. In the modern era, the world is based on some logical rules, and people's lives have been more complex. To the extent that, without some academic knowledge it is not possible to be a resourceful and intellectual person who is followed by some individuals, and be trusted. Educated people are the most eligible ones to lead a group since they have pushed back the frontiers of knowledge. Also, they have a broad perspective which helps them to come up with innovative solutions when a problem pops up. As a matter of fact, acquiring this extent knowledge is in desperate need of helping hand of professors and nonstop effort which have to be developed. Rarely, do some illiterate people can be accepted as a leader by a group, so people should develop their abilities, therefore, it means that leadership needs some effort and it does not come naturally.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 289, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...ing, stress controlling to name of few. people may intrinsically have some of these sk...
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Line 2, column 828, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'was'.
Suggestion: was always
...ng when he was a teenager. At first, he always was injured and overwhelmed with a lot of p...
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Line 5, column 794, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[1]
Message: The adverb 'Rarely' is usually not used at the beginning of a sentence.
...stop effort which have to be developed. Rarely, do some illiterate people can be accep...
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Line 5, column 996, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... effort and it does not come naturally.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, such as, as a matter of fact, as a result, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 15.1003584229 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2375.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 493.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81744421907 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71206996034 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74978001124 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513184584178 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 752.4 618.680645161 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4928610511 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.095238095 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4761904762 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7619047619 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119084246589 0.236089414692 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0391455398351 0.076458572812 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037381263255 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0887169089288 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0180746482738 0.0645574589148 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 86.8835125448 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 289, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...ing, stress controlling to name of few. people may intrinsically have some of these sk...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 828, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'was'.
Suggestion: was always
...ng when he was a teenager. At first, he always was injured and overwhelmed with a lot of p...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 794, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[1]
Message: The adverb 'Rarely' is usually not used at the beginning of a sentence.
...stop effort which have to be developed. Rarely, do some illiterate people can be accep...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 996, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... effort and it does not come naturally.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, such as, as a matter of fact, as a result, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 15.1003584229 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2375.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 493.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81744421907 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71206996034 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74978001124 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513184584178 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 752.4 618.680645161 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4928610511 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.095238095 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4761904762 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7619047619 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119084246589 0.236089414692 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0391455398351 0.076458572812 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037381263255 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0887169089288 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0180746482738 0.0645574589148 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 86.8835125448 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.