Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Leadership comes
naturally. One cannot learn how to develop it.
First, leadership is just about practice. Being an impressive leader demands some critical features, such as self-confidence, effective speech methods, and manipulating technics. All of these factors together make a powerful leader. But the point is, an individual who wants to become a leader should gain all of these characteristics, which is obviously cannot be inherited from person to person. For example, consider Hitler, before his reign, he was a total representative of misery. He did not have any food to eat, clothes to wear, or shelter to be covered by. but during about twenty years, he became one of the world-class influential supreme leaders. What vivid is, he had not been born with innate leadership skills and on the contrary, he had learned all of these fine details about supremacy during his tough years in the army, in the trenches of World War One.
Furthermore, according to recent experiments conducted at Yale University, the quality of caring behavior, which parents propose, has a vast effect on children's mental condition. For instance, kids who had supportive parents than those who had not, showed leadership behaviors when they were playing with their peers. For example, they determined other children's positions in a soccer game or they used to play rulers role in their theatrical games. As a result, this research proves that we were not born with inherent leadership characteristics or skills, and quite the contrary, we have been obtaining all of these skills and methods since we come to this world and not before that.
To put it in a nutshell, I believe that people should learn how to become a leader instead of expecting from be born with this phenotype. Because first, there are numerous examples of historical figures who had learned how to deal with controlling others, and second, experiments have shown that children's behavior is mostly shaped by their parent's behavior.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, second, so, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 314.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12738853503 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83535373462 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617834394904 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.0895204632 48.9658058833 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 5.45110844103 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123400358068 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0384984115145 0.076458572812 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384805576338 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0875956150722 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.026499274174 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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