Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: “Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children”. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Some people think that our life is much easier and comfortable than it was when our grandparents were children but some people think that it wasn’t. Personally speaking, I think that these days our life is much easier and comfortable because everything has changed over this time because of technology. I will discuss some aspects of technology that changed our life for the best such as a transport transportation, a communication, and also differences in living conditions.
First, the transportation like cars has facilitated our life lives to such an extent that we can cover thousands of miles without wasting our time, getting tired, and exhausted. For example, my grandparents live in a village and before cars appeared in their village they had had to go to the city center for 30 kilometers on foot to buy clothes, groceries and other stuff which took them minimum 3-4 hours. Now, we can get to the shopping mall which is in 30 kilometers far only in 20 minutes and this was such a convenience which my grandparents dreamed.
Second, the communications like phones made our life lives considerably better because I can be in touch with my friends, parents, and classmates whenever I want. Also, I can have a long conversation with my girlfriend for hours without any interruption. Moreover, instead of letters now we can use messages because they are really fast, simple, and convenient in use. You can get an answer to your message as fast as light speed. For example, my grandparents could contact with my mother only by letters when she moved out to live with my father after their marriage. As my grandmother says it took so long to get answer from mother. (that she almost “died”). This is a great advantage of our modern technological present.
Finally, my grandparents’ living condition were was very miserable. Their parents worked hard to endow a member of the family with money but that was not enough and even my grandparents had to work to buy clothes for themselves and to help the family budget for low salary after school. During work time they did school homework. On the contrary, we don’t have any problem like grandparents had. Our parents’ work, that’s enough for us, we even don’t think that from where the money is coming and where it is going to. We are living in comfortable life.
As I have illustrated, we can see that today’s life is much better, easier, comfortable, and convenient than our grandparent’s life. So, we should not complain about trivial problems once we have. Instead we should just look back on our grandparents’ life and consider that what a happy life we have.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, look, moreover, really, second, so, for example, i think, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 69.0 43.0788530466 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2226.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 449.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95768374165 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60321845022 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08784777715 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518930957684 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 675.0 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1932259168 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7826086957 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5217391304 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91304347826 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190856658934 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652158143607 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628972730795 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109496204171 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432687934338 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 10.002688172 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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