do you agree or disagree with the following statement? life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when our grandparents were a child? use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Needless to say, one of the most important things which all people like to have, because of its enjoyment for them, is comfortable life. Therefore, all individuals have always been trying to provide easy and comfortable lives for themselves. In this regard, some people believe that our life is easier and more comfortable than it was when our grandparents were children. I agree with this view and I will discuss my reasons in the following paragraphs.
Some individuals believe that modern life is so harder than life in the past. Such people wrongly believe that in modern time because of complexity that our lives have individuals have to work hard in order to gain things which they want, while in the past people did simple works and they could have all necessary things which they wanted to lead glad life. Therefore, they have posed that we have less comfortable life than time which our grandparents were child. I disagree with this view, because when our grandparents were child they had to works in farms from early morning to midnight in order to have enough foods for eating, while in modern time we work around 8 or 6 hours per day and we can provide enough foods and even more than enough foods for our family. You can take my grandfather as the best example for this case. Once he told me that when he was child, he had to woke up very early and go to forests to hunt somethings for family that this work took round 14 hours per day and sometimes he could not find animals for hunting. Hence his family was forced to sleep without food. Thus, life in modern time is so easier than past.
Technologies help human to have easier life. This topic has been discussed by many sociologists that the majority of them believe that in this time we have more comfortable life than time that our grandparents were child, because in modern time we have access to technologies that do all difficult works for us and these technologies has increased our works' efficiency that means we have had more things to use. Hence these sociologists believe that invention of technologies is the most important thing in human history that release human from doing hard works. I agree with this arguments, because in the past human have to do all works with their hand that was so difficult for them, in modern time all works have done via technologies and human just control these technologies via computers. By way of illustration, I can refer to some statistics which have been published by many international organizations. Based on these statistics numbers of poor people have decreased from 80% to 20% of human population, because of a lot of foods which have been provided for individuals by presence of technologies. Thus, technologies help human to have easier life.
In brief, as I discussed in the previous paragraphs, some people have posed that life is easier in this time than time that our grandparents were child. I argued that this opinion is correct for a couple of reasons. First, in this time people work less hours than time that our grandparents were child, second, modern life is so easier than past because of different technologies which human invented to lead more comfortable lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, second, so, therefore, thus, while, as for, in brief
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 29.0 11.0286738351 263% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 79.0 43.0788530466 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 75.0 52.1666666667 144% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2659.0 1977.66487455 134% => OK
No of words: 556.0 407.700716846 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78237410072 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.85588840946 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60473075425 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.381294964029 0.524837075471 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 817.2 618.680645161 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.5439893743 48.9658058833 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.863636364 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2727272727 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.18181818182 5.45110844103 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245347255758 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0962831232474 0.076458572812 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0830041880584 0.0737576698707 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195695740607 0.150856017488 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491155086028 0.0645574589148 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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