Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Every living creature in this hectic world has faced the hustle and bustle of life to some extent. Life difficulties could significantly differ from one generation to another. In my opinion, although today's competitive world has its particular problems, our grandparents have no idea about them and never cope with them. Still, overall, the current generation is more prosperous. I will explain my reasons in the following paragraphs.
First, unlike in the past, people relied on their parents; the modern world affords them to live independently. Independency is a tantamount concept to convenience and happiness. To clarify, while the previous descendants had limited choices for life, and often everything was pre-arranged for them, even their occupation, nowadays people are more likely to live on their own. A positive relationship, responsibility, a sense of control and purpose stem from a self-sufficient character. Living off on parents lets them decide on every aspect of one's life. In the past decades, parents made every decision, even about when one should go to bed, or who he/she could establish a friendship. These are just a few to mention. As we know, such options don't exist to our grandparents but a dream; Which drastically has changed in recent years, people no longer have to continue their parent's job, despite past descendants, the number of girls graduating from university constantly increasing, and after a certain age so many people leave apart from their parents. All the examples of independence just mentioned are the contemporary world's gifts to humankind. Its effects of being self-reliant on making a more free life are undeniable.
The second reason I think in this way is that the genesis of technology has brought comfort with it. Technology affected all aspects of human life. High-tech equipment like public transportation, kitchen appliances, Internet and communication applications, medical facilities are just a few examples of technology souvenirs. At last hundred years ago, they did not access minor medical facilities, and just a common illness threatens their health. Communication was so hard for long distances, as well. For instance, My grandmother's eyes still fill with tears when she describes how it was hard when my uncle went to the military, and she had not been able to hear her boy's voice for two years. Thank to the Internet, making voice calls and also video calls are not a dream anymore. As you see, the advancement of technology could also consider a cure to our feeling of 'run out of gas' emotionally.
In conclusion, I think the advantages of current life outweigh its difficulties because of an independent lifestyle and technological advancement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, still, well, while, apart from, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2228.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 435.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12183908046 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94762848307 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577011494253 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 709.2 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.59856630824 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 20.6003584229 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 435.0 20.1344086022 2160% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 48.9658058833 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 2228.0 100.406767564 2219% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 435.0 20.6045352989 2111% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 117.0 5.45110844103 2146% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 11.8709677419 8% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123117910848 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123117910848 0.076458572812 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0709519244993 0.150856017488 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312874560693 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 220.2 11.7677419355 1871% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -370.05 58.1214874552 -637% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.10430107527 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 172.9 10.1575268817 1702% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.9 10.9000537634 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 29.35 8.01818996416 366% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 59.0 10.002688172 590% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 176.0 10.0537634409 1751% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 59.0 10.247311828 576% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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