Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
we are living in era of technology which has improved greatly compared with past times. in earlier years there was no inventions such as mobile, internet, cars and etc. people were struggling with more difficulties and today we are living easier and more conveniently.
first, mankind were using animals like horse, donkey, camel and etc as vehicle to transport their freight and immigrate between countries. no highway was constucted. people were making caravans they had to wait for it to be completed they could not move arbitrarily. with invention of automobiles and construction of infraststructure of ways we are able to shift the distances in less than a days that was lasting over months in preceding decades. losses were vast and many freight such as vegetables and fruits colud not be transported because they would be deteriorated. lack of a simple technology caused poor economies and illnesses. in our region lack of fruits which were source of vitamin-D were reason of ostereoposis diseases and we can predict many other problems with absence of automobiles.
secondly, our ancestors were communicating by letters which was carried by post offices to long distances and were using a special pigeon which is trained to carry the letters to short distances. by discovery of mobile we are able to communicate to every point around the world too quickly.
i want to sum up technology made our life more convenient and it wil going to get better than now in future.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children 60
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 66
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: We
we are living in era of technology which h...
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Suggestion: In
...roved greatly compared with past times. in earlier years there was no inventions s...
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Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...ventions such as mobile, internet, cars and etc. people were struggling with more diffic...
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Suggestion: People
...such as mobile, internet, cars and etc. people were struggling with more difficulties ...
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Suggestion: First
...living easier and more conveniently. first, mankind were using animals like horse,...
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Suggestion: No
...reight and immigrate between countries. no highway was constucted. people were mak...
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Suggestion: People
...n countries. no highway was constucted. people were making caravans they had to wait f...
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Suggestion: With
...pleted they could not move arbitrarily. with invention of automobiles and constructi...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...ble to shift the distances in less than a days that was lasting over months in precedi...
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Suggestion: Losses
...sting over months in preceding decades. losses were vast and many freight such as vege...
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Line 3, column 470, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun freight seems to be countable; consider using: 'many freights'.
Suggestion: many freights
...preceding decades. losses were vast and many freight such as vegetables and fruits colud not...
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Suggestion: In
...gy caused poor economies and illnesses. in our region lack of fruits which were so...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'sourced'.
Suggestion: sourced
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Suggestion: By
...o carry the letters to short distances. by discovery of mobile we are able to comm...
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Suggestion: I
...point around the world too quickly. i want to sum up technology made our life...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...point around the world too quickly. i want to sum up technology made our life...
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Line 7, column 99, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...and it wil going to get better than now in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1239.0 1977.66487455 63% => OK
No of words: 245.0 407.700716846 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05714285714 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87280256641 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628571428571 0.524837075471 120% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 618.680645161 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6055898162 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3076923077 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8461538462 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92307692308 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.5376344086 343% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179713887182 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606029800774 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584048234896 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10736252923 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413931462924 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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