Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In twenty years, there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
As population is increasing tremendously, designed highways are incapable of vast cars. people have to do their daily task so they have to use transportation vehicles to do their jobs on time. today pubic transportation is so time-consuming, people refered to private cars as most of society members have one each. enhanced numbers of vehicles caused global warming and air pollution, so experts have to find a way to cut the damages which is threading the life of our next generations, plants and animals. so i agree there will be decreased automobiles in upcoming years.
global warming is so hot and important news which is accounted to raise temperature of earth. A research shows forest which is habitat of most animals is destroyed and cause their extinction. as they are going to destruct it means our eco system will lose its stability and living on earth will be harder. scholars have gathered from all over the world to hinder this venture. they compromised to cut number of cars which is one reason of global warming.
secondly, fuels which motive force of vehicles are air pollutant - causes many diseases such as asthma , lung illness and etc. a report from our local hospital indicates growth in mentioned illnesses compared to last five decades. the increment of sickness invoked experts to search for a solution which one solution is reducing number of cars,
in fact vehicles which generate on petroleum or diesel are causing global warming and air pollution have to be reduced regularly.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...tion vehicles to do their jobs on time. today pubic transportation is so time-consumi...
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...r next generations, plants and animals. so i agree there will be decreased automob...
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...llnesses compared to last five decades. the increment of sickness invoked experts t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, secondly, so, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 43.0788530466 30% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1264.0 1977.66487455 64% => OK
No of words: 251.0 407.700716846 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03585657371 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77204471553 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613545816733 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 618.680645161 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7291754946 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2307692308 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3076923077 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.23076923077 5.45110844103 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0876929644718 0.236089414692 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0336653169004 0.076458572812 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427035702167 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0478134104172 0.150856017488 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379940393518 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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