Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parents jobs than to choose jobs that are very different from their parents jobs

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youngsters when graduated from university,have to ...
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...oungsters when graduated from university,have to start new practical and experimental...
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...imental stage of life which is the job. they have to look for an occupation to be ap...
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...and related to their field of studying. searching for a job with mentioned characteristic...
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...h their parents are not in similar job. most of them will be disappointed and will s...
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...d fields. Money is need of every one to have a happily life and to meet their...
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... Money is need of every one to have a happily life and to meet their daily life needs. sea...
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...ife and to meet their daily life needs. searching for a suitable job is time-consuming an...
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...ly by doing job in in-appropriate jobs. working in unrelated jobs means their efforts a...
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...ing as a school mathematics teacher. moreover, those who study same programs as their...
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... more successful during universities and will have brighter future. my father has...
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...rsities and will have brighter future. my father has a construction company and i...
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...y father has a construction company and i studied engineering. in engineering the...
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...tion company and i studied engineering. in engineering there are practical lessons...
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...eering there are practical lessons too. there was only a single laboratory and we wer...
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...nd we were sixty students in the class. there was not enough time for every one to do...
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...nts were not grasping the subject well. fortunately i could do it many times and under supe...
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...always it helped me to get great marks. i could apply for master degree to Harvar...
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... its requirements was having great marks in undergraduate program. finally, i ...
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... of anarchy in society will be avoided. because of mentioned reasons i agree with the g...
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... of anarchy in society will be avoided. because of mentioned reasons i agree with the g...
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...e avoided. because of mentioned reasons i agree with the given statement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, look, moreover, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 313.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92332268371 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90963993519 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539936102236 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1469567779 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6470588235 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4117647059 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.17647058824 5.45110844103 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.5376344086 488% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283501263494 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865596595115 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106097491796 0.0737576698707 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196648885929 0.150856017488 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0846870675035 0.0645574589148 131% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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