It is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parents’ jobs than to choose jobs that are very different from their parents’ job.
The most important lesson of the life is earning money by doing hard work. People are doing job for earning money. Some people preffered to doing job in the same field as his parents doing or some preffered to doing job in diffrent field. I preffered to doing job in the same field as my parents doing. I have have two reasons for that, which i will explain in this following essay.
First of all, it is easy for the children to doing job in this field, because his father is already made a smooth road map with all the direction. If you faceing any problem, then there is your parents besides you to help you and guide you. So, it will become easy for the every children to doing work. For instance, we are two brother and one sister. My elder brother was just completed his bechloar degree and get placement in the same company where my father was working. Becasue of that, it will so easy for my brother. My father was always giving him tips so, he was doing all the right things. As a result, of that todays in just 4 year of tenure my brother grab the position of block manager in his company.
Secondly, therer is no chance of making same mistake at the job, if we are doing job at samer place where our parents doing. Person's mind is alsways advantureous in nature. Mind is always wanted to doing new experiment at the job. But, sometime we fail in this experiment. If we are in the same job as our parent is having then, our parent try to stop you becasue, they already done this new thing. To illustrate this my sister's example is enough for it. My sister has been always keen to doing something new. So, she decided to start the new startup, simulteneously with her currunt job. But, my father is stoping her. Becasue he know if, she started working on her own startup, then she will not able to focus on the either he startup or her currnt job.
To wrap up all this things, i prefer to doing job in the same field as my father is doing becasue, i get well prepared work plan from my parents' experience and becasue, very least chances of making mistake at that place.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, for instance, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1695.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 392.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.32397959184 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.1836958205 2.67179642975 82% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489795918367 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 515.7 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.0406811621 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.625 100.406767564 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08333333333 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232792581912 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762447560731 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0799090646446 0.0737576698707 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161436565698 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536131769353 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 11.7677419355 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 58.1214874552 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.48 10.9000537634 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.48 8.01818996416 81% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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