One of the most important effects of the modern world emersion is improving the relationship between people. The means of communication and kinds of people relationships are getting more sophisticated, and, as a result, some requirements for living in this world have arisen. Due to the unavoidable role of politeness, some people consider this trait as one of these requirements and believe that we should never be impolite in today's modern world. In contrast, others don't consider it that much remarkable. For me, the first opinion carries more weight.
To begin with, being impolite eradicates love and kindness between people and destroys relationships. Impoliteness to people, at every level, whether consciously or unconsciously, will damage the basis of our relationship and results in the destruction of it. The person we are impolite with will be annoyed by us at the first step, and if we continue our rudeness and do not apologize, that guy would get a negative impression and try to get away suddenly or little by little. Thus, the relationship will be destroyed, and the love, sympathy, and friendship won't continue anymore. In conclusion, I believe that respect and politeness are the foundation of love and companionship.
Secondly, being impolite is the source of most of the social obstacles. As I previously mentioned, being impolite can destroy relationships. Relationships can be defined between unfamiliar people, friends, family, and probably the most important between husband and wife. According to recent research, the reason for most divorces is the impoliteness and disrespect to each of the couple's families by the other one. One of the spouses starts to insult the other spouse's family, and the love and its inseparable part, respect, completely disappears. On the other side, a significant percentage of fights, especially those end in the murder of one of the parties, start from impoliteness. In the battle, people repeat the famous slogan, "an argument is an argument," and when trouble happens, they express remorse for provoking the other party in the fight. In summary, impoliteness and disrespect can cause a lot of social problems like divorces and murder.
Impoliteness is not horrible only in the case of people. Disrespect can happen between social, political, or business groups, between states in a country, and even between different countries. The impoliteness can be even more severe and dangerous, cause civil or foreign wars between fanatical nations, and hinder communities' progress.
To wrap it up, impoliteness anywhere and anytime and to everyone can put down relationships and the kindness and love between people. In addition, disrespect can make social obstacles at every level of society. Therefore, I believe that people should never be impolite to another person.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'spouses'' or 'spouse's'?
Suggestion: spouses'; spouse's
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &apos
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, in summary, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 31.0 13.8261648746 224% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2400.0 1977.66487455 121% => OK
No of words: 446.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38116591928 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0819150289 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520179372197 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 754.2 618.680645161 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.86738351254 482% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1940067859 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5833333333 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217015250596 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651371544221 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0842034442883 0.0737576698707 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125590414431 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517500052292 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 10.9000537634 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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