Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Money can't buy happiness. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Money has literally played a crucial role which influenced people for more than decades. Some people believe money could lead them to have a better life and also afford several desires, these would make them delightful. On the other hand, others genuinely affirm valuable experiences and happiness may not pay by money. In my opinion, there are two main reasons that the money could not afford joyful time in terms of love and time which will explore in the following essay.
First and foremost, money could not buy love and sincerity. To be specific, people would not get true love, friendship, or sincere to by money, although they have a lot of money or own many properties. This means money is not an essential part of life which makes happiness, loving from the family, friendship, or who certainly cares about would be a significant thing. In contrast, some people believe having a lot of money could be happy because people will respect the person who has money, give priority, and have many people in life. These are uncertain love and have a happy life. Having a good time in life should be surrounded by optimistic people who support each other, staying in the right atmosphere, and being loved which makes life meaningful. Hence, money could not afford real love.
Secondly, another fact that supports my standpoint is about time. People always work hard to earn a high income which they believe that the more having money, the more they can afford every desire. This impacts on their lifetime either spending the valuable time with their beloved or doing the activities which improve the skills. Time could not be purchased by money, even though people offer a high cost to trade with the time, it is impossible to get the time back. For example, my aunt has dedicated the whole time for working to getting the promotion, she did not have much more time to spend with her son, this made her miss to see his growth development, after that she has realized how important it is and she could not return the time, she decided to reorganize the time and spend the quality time with her son which is fulfilled her happy life.
In conclusion, it can be seen clearly that money cannot afford happiness. I firmly believe that spending time with beloved is the best moment in which money could not pay for true love, sincere, and solve the time in the past.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1957.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 414.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7270531401 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28840865261 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492753623188 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 609.3 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.8728345799 48.9658058833 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.722222222 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128154153096 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0545606751651 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0210085196578 0.0737576698707 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0899668315708 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00800332990575 0.0645574589148 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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