Some people prefer to work for large company. Others prefer to work for small company. Which would you prefer?
These days the size of company could directly affect with people career and personal goals. This brings a long-standing issue on whether working for large company which could gain several benefits for living or working for small company that could gain personal experiences. While it is undeniable that both options have their own merits to boast, it forces to choose one over another, my stance is in line with the view that working for the big enterprise would support to have the better life either earning lot of welfares or experience. My rationale is founded upon the following essay.
First of all, working with a large company that reputation in society could gain several employee benefit packages which would be able to assist people's lives. People who are hired by a huge enterprise may gain plenty of advantages such as a high salary, being an honor, and comprehensive health insurance. These supports the employee who operates under the enormous business. Due to the benefit of a large company, many people would like to be a part of a big firm to support their living and obtain the opportunity. Even though workers must work hard and dedicate personal life to work, they also want to join with the big company to get the huge chance in lives. Hence, being crews in the big company would gain a several benefits, yet it may affect with personal time.
Secondly, people would get experiences from a large company which surrounding the talented people and good environment. To be specific, staying close with people who have multiskilling would be able to learn the way to think, how to handle with the problems, and adapt in life. Furthermore, people who work under large company may get reference which define excellently they are. For instance, working with Facebook company which several people would like to be a part of team in the company has provided valuable experience, employees could acquire working procedure from colleagues who have advance skills and could learn by their own. These experiences working with large company are able to indicate in the resume which supports curriculum vitae looks professional.
In conclusion, it is clearly that working for large enterprise would get plenty of advantages. I would prefer to work for large company as getting particular benefit packages which covers worker lives, nevertheless these might trade with their personal life. Besides, working under huge firm are significantly factor which could provide inestimable experiences and incite the potential.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, furthermore, hence, if, look, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 9.8082437276 214% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2120.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 413.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13317191283 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60588038802 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479418886199 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 662.4 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5348738803 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.777777778 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9444444444 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 5.45110844103 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.403937663278 0.236089414692 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140868929075 0.076458572812 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103266529794 0.0737576698707 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.283214956572 0.150856017488 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680870348829 0.0645574589148 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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