Some people think that the family is the most important influence on young adults. Other people think that friends are the most important influence on young adults. Which view do you agree with? Use examples to support your position.
In modern society, people are surrounded who stay close like families and friends. Some people believe that friends are the most influence on children. on the contrary, others believe that adults would be the most effect on youngsters. In my opinion, there are two reasons that grown-up people major effect on kids which explanation in the following essay.
First of all, the family is the most significant effect on youngsters who immature and lack understanding. To be specific, parents are the first role model that juveniles could imitate behavior in either appropriate manner or difficult courtesy without thinking. Learning from family could assist youth properly behave to others in society, also gaining valuable guidance from grown-up people can help to develop both behavior and attitude. Furthermore, the family can teach young adults to handle difficult situations, also guide them on how to solve problems. However, some adults who misbehave might teach their kids with severe sentiments. These lead children imitating behavior because they get used to it. Hence, the family is considered as the key influence on youngster which stays close to them.
Secondly, another fact that supports the standpoint is about faith. Young adults could trust family members who love them without any conditions and never deceived. Moreover generally, the parent is the one whom youths can consult individually and receive sincere responses. Even though adults hardly perceive young adult problems, they attempt to figure out and assist their children to get through these. For instance, when I had a problem I always consulted my mother. Despite the fact that we had a huge age gap, my mother listened to the whole story and tried to give the best solution to help which I could certainly rely on her. Thus, the family social status is the most crucial influence on juveniles which they could believe without a doubt.
In summary, it is clear that family strongly affects children which they would be able to copy the behavior both positive and negative sides. Besides, the parent is the best partner who listening and providing the greatest way to cope with the obstacles. I firmly believe that family is the most essential influence on youngsters
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...e most significant effect on youngsters who immature and lack understanding. To be specific,...
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Suggestion: Moreover,
...hout any conditions and never deceived. Moreover generally, the parent is the one whom y...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, for instance, in summary, first of all, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1892.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 364.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1978021978 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5300989698 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557692307692 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6296472177 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0952380952 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.7619047619 5.45110844103 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212980513514 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694653502691 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706213936877 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14290536002 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483649411583 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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