Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most advertisements make products seem much better then they really are.
It goes without saying that in this progressive and competitive world where we live, most companies need to advertise their products to attract more and more consumers. While some people believe that most advertisements make products seem much better than they really are, others, on the other hand, have a different view. Personally speaking, I firmly agree with the former group. To substantiate my point of view, two significant reasons are being explored in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, today, there is high competition between different companies that produce same products to attract consumers as much as possible. In competition situations, each of the companies is trying to produce more qualified products and advertises them in the best way that is possible. Since some of these companies do not have professional workers or do not have enough money to promote their products, they have to deceive potential customers by unreal advertisements to keep pace with other companies. For example, 2 years ago, I bought a dress on online shopping that its advertisements claim its dresses have extremely good texture and they endure years. When we delivered this dress, it had no texture as good as advertisement claims.
Secondly, people are searching to find the best goods and most of the people depend on advertisements to find which of the goods is better. These days, with the genesis of social media, needs of people are increasing, and people tend to change their stuff and things frequently and follow trends. As a result, individuals are looking for faivorite goods among advertisements.SO, the companies have to show their goods in a way that they seem the most qualified products because people consider advertisments as a trsutworthy. For instance, I want to buy new shoes and my little brother works for a shoe company. He tells me that company’s shoes are not comfortable for my feet. However, I watch advertisment of his company over and over on television that claims that these shoes are so comforatble.
In conclusion, taking two above-mentioned reasons into account, I do believe that most advertisements make products seem much better than they really are. Not only can being highly competitive between different companies leads to these advertisements, but also most of the people depend on advertisements and buy anything they are advertising.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2004.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 384.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21875 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05682137212 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528645833333 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 611.1 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3098452046 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.882352941 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5882352941 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.05882352941 5.45110844103 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309471339341 0.236089414692 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0995810818434 0.076458572812 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0955107199115 0.0737576698707 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220785456484 0.150856017488 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0837463101331 0.0645574589148 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 11.7677419355 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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