Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Most advertisements make products seem much better than they really are.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
At the turn of the new century, with the development of human’s modern society and galloping rate of science and technology more and more people are becoming attracted to advertisements. Some people are of the opinion that most advertisements make products look much precise than they really are. Other group is indifferent to this. I, personally believe that advertisements do misrepresent the products. I hold this opinion for certain reasons which I will explore in subsequent paragraphs.
First aspect to point is that what provokes people to believe the advertisements to be genuine is the emotions, such trust, loyalty. Some people get immensely attract to advertisements of certain products that they do not think practically and buy out of eagerness. For instance, whenever I scroll shopping sites; I pick new products of my favorite brand lakme for testing purpose without thinking about its consequences upon my skin.
Second subtle point is that excess advertisements commits brainwashing. Advertisers earn money in abundance by showing an average product as prime important. When an advertisement of same product is shown again and again, then our senses start believing it to be true. For example, when naive brand patanjali that claimed to be pure ayurvedic was introduced in India', it was advertised drastically everywhere through all media source. As a result, innocent civilians blindly followed it.
In conclusion, advertisements definitely misrepresent products triggering emotions of people physically and intellectually.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, really, second, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1334.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 235.0 407.700716846 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67659574468 4.8611393121 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25378631691 2.67179642975 122% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672340425532 0.524837075471 128% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.7777900077 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2857142857 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7857142857 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187399206679 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645375670552 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685826106312 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107007090519 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463886458886 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 10.9000537634 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.