Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The extended family (grandparents, cousins, aunts, and uncles) is less important now than it was in the past.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In the turn of new century, with the advent of mordernisation and galloping scientific advances, society has undergone a profound change. Family structure has changed a lot. Nowadays, people prefer unit families instead of extended ones with long list of relatives. Some people are of the opinion that extended family are more important than living in single family included children and parents.Others might hold some different viewpoint. I, personally believe that extended families are equally important today as it was in past. I, hold this opinion for certain reasons which I will explain in subsequent paragraphs.
First point to focus upon is that what provokes people to live in extended families is love, care , compassion, respect, co-operation, acceptance. These are the values we learn from our extended family members. Our family stands by our side without referring to the situation. To expelling more, I personally live in an extended family. We happily help each other on all fronts such as ladies help in kitchen, handling household chores, taking care of children. Male members look after business dealings, planning vacations, budgeting. Division of labor is the biggest advantage of staying in extended family.
Second subtle point is that being in extended family leads to no worries. Because, parents, grandparents and other relatives are always there to share your accomplishments, fears and rejections. They provide us with best counselling. Many researches have proved that children staying in extended families with grandparents are more gregarious, elite and sophisticated as compared to single families where parents lack time to listen to their children.
Lastly, staying in extended families provides with exposure to people with lot many experiences of long years. For instance, my grandmother used to teach me how to cook different dishes, in which she was an expert. We can help younger cousins in studies as well. Each and every family member can add to our experiences and help us to ride ladder of success.
In conclusion, Extended families provides with sense of secureness and protection. Also, fun being around different generation of same family. So, these hold important part in our lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, lastly, look, second, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1900.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 350.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42857142857 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86311037075 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591428571429 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.2961378827 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.1666666667 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5833333333 20.6045352989 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54166666667 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214108153112 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597392071056 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457296629198 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121668672489 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407778810113 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 58.1214874552 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.62 10.9000537634 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.