Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Most advertisements make products seem much better than they really are.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
At the turn of the new century, with the development of human’s modern society and galloping rate of science and technology more and more people are becoming attracted to advertisements. Some people are of the opinion that most advertisements make products look much precise than they really are. Other group is indifferent to this. I, personally believe that advertisements do misrepresent the products. I hold this opinion for certain reasons which I will explore in subsequent paragraphs.
First aspect to point is that what provokes people to believe the advertisements to be genuine is the emotions, such trust, loyalty. Some people get immensely attract to advertisements of certain products that they do not think practically and buy out of eagerness. For instance, whenever I scroll shopping sites; I pick new products of my favourite brand lakme for testing purpose without thinking about its consequences upon my skin.
Second subtle point is that excess advertisements commits brainwashing. Advertisers earn money in abundance by showing an average product as prime important. When an advertisement of same product is shown again and again, then our senses start believing it to be true. For example, when naive brand patanjali that claimed to be pure ayurvedic was introduced in India', it was advertised drastically everywhere through all media source. As a result, innocent civilians blindly followed it.
Lastly, certain advertisements spread negativity among public. For instance, products claiming fairness such as fair and lovely face cream, fair and handsome cream for male show colour discrimination. All these products inhibit hatred for black colour and infuse feeling of inequality among people which in turn negatively impacts mental status of a person with dark skin. Government should thing before censoring these kind of advertisements.
In conclusion, advertisements definitely misrepresent products triggering emotions of people physically and intellectually. It is our duty to think critically before buying a product. With the assistance from consumer court citizens can sue such advertisers who mislead public consumer courts.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 415, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...overnment should thing before censoring these kind of advertisements. In conclusion, ad...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, lastly, look, really, second, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1861.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 327.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69113149847 4.8611393121 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15109087406 2.67179642975 118% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639143730887 0.524837075471 122% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.4230353614 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.05 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.35 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179200998661 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0551518461354 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599501632949 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0996845483034 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460967361695 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 10.9000537634 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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