Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Travelling has always been fun thing to do. Whether, a person is travelling to his own country or to foreign country, it do have some outstanding benefits. Some people are of the opinion that they get more benefited from travelling in their own country while some other hold an opinion that is in contrast with previous ones. I, personally, believe that travelling in ones own country ripe more benefits. I, hold this opinion for certain reasons which I will explore in subsequent paragraphs.
First and the foremost point is that what provokes people to travel in their own country is language barrier. In most foreign countries, English is the only communication language, which many people all over the world might not be knowing. Just for example, my parents who belong Punjab, India only speaks Punjabi and Hindi. They do not know how to speak English nor do they understand. In such case, it becomes really tough for person to travel foreign country without company of English speaker. So, people instead prefer to travel their own country where language is not a barrier.
Second subtle point to focus upon is that travelling own country leads to lot many benefits to students by enhancing their knowledge. For instance, History teacher can take students at different historical places like monuments in Rajasthan, Taj mahal, Laal kila and pilgrimage places such as Shirdi, Golden temple, Ajanta caves and many more. Such expeditions can help students explore the concepts and facts which they only studied in their history textbooks.Thus, travelling own country results in life long experiences for students and help them with their studies.
Lastly, travelling to different cities and states of our own country helps with brotherhood and unity among our people. We can get to know customs, beliefs, values, festivals of our country. People will come closer and we can minimize our differences. After all we are all one family. Moreover, shopping and travelling in our own country enhances our country's economic growth which in turn will help its citizens.
From all the examples given above, I conclude that travelling in our own country has lot many benefits. A person get a chance to closely know to roots of its country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, lastly, moreover, really, second, so, thus, while, after all, for example, for instance, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1888.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 369.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11653116531 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58638830322 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531165311653 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.5703081103 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.9047619048 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5714285714 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360105582597 0.236089414692 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116038528289 0.076458572812 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0919014102158 0.0737576698707 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209128012397 0.150856017488 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0739338010089 0.0645574589148 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.