Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Most advertisements make products seem much better than they really are.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
In recent years, we see the amount of money that big companies devote for advertising is rapidly increased. The reason for this phenomena could be the benefit they get, like brand loyalty and increased selling rate, from advertising. But the question here is, does this catching clients attention happens by fidelity or not? I mean is it reasonable to say every brand that devotes a large amount of money for advertising on the internet, tv shows and other ads, produce their products in higher quality? I firmly believe it is not true, I think when a factory claim that their products are better than others, it should be proven by the quality of the products and documentaries which shows their brand is more worthy than others.
The documentary that shows the worth of a brand or a production is the comments of the consumers, not something the manufacturers claim. Since users do not benefit from the factories’ salaries, in most of the time, they share their real experience and do not have any interest to deceive others, who are in the dilemma and not sure to buy the specific product or not.
To sum up, I think it is very important for people, not to pay attention to the amount of advertisement that a brand may do. They should think deeper and search for the origin of a brand.
Because advertising shows the product unreal than what they are and puts the products in a deceitful beautiful showcase to attract people to buy.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'clients'' or 'client's'?
Suggestion: clients'; client's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, i mean, i think, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1197.0 1977.66487455 61% => OK
No of words: 253.0 407.700716846 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73122529644 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66042847548 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 212.727598566 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557312252964 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 618.680645161 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.8976369983 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.7 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165241966255 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638912992394 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418921683992 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107536351772 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290872045714 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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