Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most advertisements make products seem much better than they really are. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most advertisements make products seem much better than they really are. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Nowadays many companies provide advertisements in many ways such as TV, newspapers, and YouTube. They use various ways to make products seem much better than they really are so that customers feel inclined to buy by seeing their advertisements.

First of all, in many cases, advertisers don’t provide all the information needed for the customers to decide whether they buy or not. They hide some disadvantageous facts about their products. For example, the other day I and some of my friends were talking about a newspaper advertisement by a bicycle shop. In it a new model of a crossbike was introduced, and the ad emphasized the lightness and the comfort ride of that bike. And we are curious about that bike and searched it on the Internet. Then, some reviews say that it got broken easily. As we can tell from this example, some ads don’t introduce their products’ negative aspects, so we should depend not only on advertisements but also on reviews by customers.

Secondly, some companies trick customers by making use of optical illusion. Even some of the most famous cosmetic companies also use such techniques. For example, they often broadcast advertisements on TV. They provide images of examinees before and after using the item advertised. They emphasize the difference of these two images, but when we look at them carefully, the background colors of them are totally different, and this will definitely have impact on how we perceive the image.

Finally, imaging techniques have been innovated very much. Companies make use of this when making advertisements. For example, nowadays I see many advertisements of food companies on YouTube. Many of them looks so delicious, so if the audience are hungry, they are sure to click the website to check the details.

To sum up, most advertisers don’t provide us with enough and accurate information about their items. Most of us are likely to be deceived by wise techniques they use to make us feel like purchasing their products.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 168, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, then, even so, for example, such as, talking about, first of all, in many cases, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1691.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 331.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10876132931 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98385441236 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549848942598 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.9134011703 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.55 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.55 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85 5.45110844103 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188221449701 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590548363 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060236697461 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122594831707 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562865059542 0.0645574589148 87% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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