Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Our parents have experienced much more than us because they have lived longer. They have many advices about life. In addition to this, we spend most of our young days with our parents, and they care about us very much. So I think parents are the best teachers.
Firstly, parents teach how to behave morally to their children. For example, when I was very young, I sometimes walk around during meals, and I was often running around in the train platform. My mother often scolded me for these childish behaviors. I think parents are worried about their children's future and this is because they often scold their young children.
Secondly, most parents have basic knowledge about language and can do basic calculations. So they can teach their children at home whenever parents are not busy and children have something they can't understand in basic subjects like arithmetics. Actually I often asked my mother about arithmetic problems I can't solve, and she helped me with my homework when I was young. Since parents can spend much time with their children they can share their knowledge with their children.
Finally, our parents can still be the best teacher even when we are grown up. When we are at a loss for serious matters such as jobs or we have to do some difficult choices, parents can help us. For example, now I am a university student and I often come across difficult choices like deciding which career I should choose. At such occasions, I can consult my mother with the matter, and she can give me some advice. And often I think her advice was right. Our parents live longer than us, so they have made much more choices than us. And because they have much influence on our lives, they can understand what we think and give right advices for us.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, for example, i think, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 310.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7064516129 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30107652497 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493548387097 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 441.9 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.3122555705 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.7894736842 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3157894737 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78947368421 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0867311714267 0.236089414692 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0382821952288 0.076458572812 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465999473678 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0612165481796 0.150856017488 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0215334750718 0.0645574589148 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 86.8835125448 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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