Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most of the biggest problems in the world will be solved in the next few decades. Use details and examples to support your
Most people in the world feel that our life is full of many sophisticated problems. Personally, I believe that most of the biggest problems in the world will be solved in the next few decades. There are several reasons why I feel this way, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, science and technology are improved and have some new things every year, so with time, they are going to be able to solve many of the problems that we are suffering from them these days. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. I was diagnosed with type one diabetes when I was five years old, and since then I had to take multiple insulin injections to be able to live normally. In addition to that, I had to poke my self multiple times a day to check my sugar levels, I had to follow up with my doctor every three months, and I had to do blood work every now and then. This way of life was so overwhelming for a kid or a teenager after that. Lately, I was introduced to a high technology machine that could be attached to my body and check my glucose levels, decide the appropriate insulin dose, and give it to me accordingly. This technology decreases almost 70% of my daily strugles.
Furthermore, internet and social media tend to make the world as a small village. People are able to communicate without the need to have an actual face to face meeting and they are able to be friends with completelly foreigners or even find many solutions for their problems that they could not find with their nearby family or friends. For instance, back to my previous example, I was able to follow up with my specialist through a modern application without the need to go toher office and wait for hours to give my the lab order then an extra hours after doing the blood work to read it for me. Thesedays, I send a request by the application. After my doctor evaluates the request, she sends the order to the lab, and I do the test by appointment only. The result then are going to be send back to my doctor office, and she will send me any comment through the application.
In conclusion, I strongly feel that most of the problems are going to be solved in the next few decades. This is not only because of the modern technology and its improvement day by day, but also because of the high ability to communicate between people through internet and social media.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 581, Rule ID: EVERY_NOW_AND_THEN[1]
Message: Use simply 'now and then'.
Suggestion: now and then
...hree months, and I had to do blood work every now and then. This way of life was so overwhelming f...
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Line 2, column 797, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...body and check my glucose levels, decide the appropriate insulin dose, and give i...
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Line 3, column 547, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'hour'?
Suggestion: hour
... to give my the lab order then an extra hours after doing the blood work to read it f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, furthermore, if, so, then, for instance, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1938.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 438.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42465753425 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53019545388 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479452054795 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 621.9 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.1176760058 48.9658058833 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.666666667 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195375664273 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721970688949 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0958198976884 0.0737576698707 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147328907402 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0795770943555 0.0645574589148 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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