Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most of the biggest problems in the world will be solved in the next few decades. Use details and examples to support your answer.
No one can deny the fact that with the modernization of world, everything seem so convenient. In the given scenario, it is perceived that now people do not need to worry about their issues as they they are going to be solved within few decades from now. Meanwhile, I am of the opinion that although modern world has various positive things to offer us however the they are creating and going to affect us in near future is unbearable. I feel this way for several reasons which I will explain in the subsequent paragraphs.
To commence with, industrialization has benefited us in many aspects like we can use various products that aids to live comforting life. However, the toxic smoke and gas released from the factory are very detrimental to us. For instance, distinct chemicals are used in industry for the production of product when mixed in air cause air polluted and they are deletorious for our heath since we inhale the oxygen from same air. Furthermore, people are enjoying their luxurious life nevertheless they are not considering the harmful impact that are caused in the process of manufacturing those commodities. Indeed, this is creating jeopardize condition now and will be even more serious in near future.
Secondly, population are elevating to the great extent and they need fooding and lodging to survive. To be more precise, people require huge space and there is no space available on land. Owing to this, they are compelled to exploit natural resources for their food and shelter. This human activity has welcoming the serious repercussion. To exemplify, less greenery is equivalent to shortage of oxygen and we all know that oxygen is the fundamental factor for the human survival. Needless to say, the day is not so far for human to face the ramification created by themself and condition will be even worse in the upcoming days.
The above mentioned statement sounds reasonable nonetheless technology has made our life convenient than ever before. Having said that, human should be mindful of the pros and cons of any activity they are carrying for example, if they are chopping down the tree fro making space then they can plan tree on other area. This way they can contribute to the preservation of ambiance and subsequently they will protect us back.
All things considered, despite the fact that advancement of world has numerous positives, there multitude of adverse effects that could risk our life and it should not be overlooked.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 193, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: they
...not need to worry about their issues as they they are going to be solved within few decad...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 361, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'they'?
Suggestion: the; they
...ous positive things to offer us however the they are creating and going to affect us in ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 155, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...live comforting life. However, the toxic smoke and gas released from the factory ...
^^
Line 4, column 263, Rule ID: FOR_FRO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'for'?
Suggestion: for
...ple, if they are chopping down the tree fro making space then they can plan tree on...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, look, nevertheless, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, for instance, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2055.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 414.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96376811594 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75903887302 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567632850242 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 653.4 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1232852242 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.157894737 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7894736842 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94736842105 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100165843128 0.236089414692 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0305088388445 0.076458572812 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0301289453839 0.0737576698707 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0588277383409 0.150856017488 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318648734788 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 86.8835125448 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.