Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most important aspect of a job is the money a person earns. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer
The financial part of the job is an essential aspect for everyone who made a decision about his or her occupation since it is the main objective of working. However, the occupation also a representation of our value and norm hence the suitability of our character and personality is a significant factor to choose a job. Therefore, I disagree with the statement because several reasons I would like to elaborate in the next paragraph.
First, our passion decides how satisfactory our result in a workplace. Although the job may give very small income, if the person involved do it wholeheartedly, the burden will lessen thus the result may be better. Albeit, the suitable of our passion more important than the wage. For example, my father is a civil servant who facilitates people to transmigrate. He roamed a forest and built an infrastructure for a remote area. Regardless of the income, which is very small, he loves the adventure, therefore, it is not an obstacle.
Second, amiable colleague sometime becomes a deciding factor since no one prefers work in a hostile environment. As a thing to consider, environment plays a significant role to enhance the employee performance. Place that flourish creativity, teamwork, and analytical skill will more advantageous for the worker than just a place where the employee gets a massive amount of money.
Lastly, the purpose of the job, sometimes overcome the low financial status. Many people work as a volunteer or in a war zone because they believe that what they do is significant for other. Furthermore, the job may be hazardous or even tiresome but since they are beneficent for the world, they willing to do it. For instance, the doctor who works in a doctor without border program, probably less affluent than the plastic surgeon in the middle of a capital city, but they do it earnestly because of the job purpose.
Ultimately, there is another factor besides money that plays a major role in people decision about their occupation. All things considered, I personally believe that money is not the most important things in a job.
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Suggestion:
...not the most important things in a job.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, lastly, may, second, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1752.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 350.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00571428571 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95647887646 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562857142857 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1103012548 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3333333333 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4444444444 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05555555556 5.45110844103 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149215869869 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0437815240864 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050501648204 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0841729544154 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510741836874 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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