Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
When it comes to a friend, everyone has a different perspective about whether to keep the old one close or to gain a new one. The preceded friend probably knows us thoroughly, he or she has supported us for a long time thus he/she position is irreplaceable. However, I personally disagree with the statement, I believe that it is necessary to make a new friend because of numerous friends are ineluctable to build a formal networking. Moreover, a number of friends are commensurate with our chance to success for either job or business. The variation of character also teaches us to flexible in the face of different personality and tries to understand the different point of view. Additionally, the new colleague can expose us to new activities or hobby hence broaden our knowledge.
The more people you know the more extensive your network is hence there are more opportunities for collaboration and work arrangement. In this millennial era with more advanced technology in transportation and communication, it is important to expand a company to another continent. The business not longer circumscribes to a regional area but it needs to expanse globally. A friend in another country can facilitate us to augment our business venture. The colleague becomes a resourceful informant, especially about the market situation. Therefore, we can get the first-hand knowledge before we execute the plan.
Another thing to consider, new friends can assist us to reach an acme of work status. As we grow and get promoted, we will face a more complicated obstacle. The new friend can give the support we need and accompany us through the journey. They have more apprehension about our current situation and they can suggest us how to proceed. In the other hand, the old friend who knows us in ancient time may lose the grasp of what we need because we transform to a different character. In the end, without a new friend, we will unlikely to reach a higher accomplishment.
Finally, makes a new friend is an acquired skill. We need to be amiable to attract other to connect with us. Furthermore, we need to comply with a different character and adjust it accordingly. For example, the friendly person usually has a certain knack to easily confer in conversation, they outgoing and have laidback personality. Moreover, they are not judgmental and very lenient to distinctive opinion. The skill is actually a product of an artful communication skill. Additionally, a new friend can open us to a new hobby or strange activities thus broaden our knowledge.
In conclusion, I disagree with the statement because the substantial benefit of having a new friend such as the networking and the new experience. In addition, make a new friend doesn’t necessarily lose the old one.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 232, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'positions'.
Suggestion: positions
...upported us for a long time thus he/she position is irreplaceable. However, I personally...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, also, but, finally, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, another thing, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2320.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 461.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03253796095 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13021122184 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498915401302 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 738.9 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 13.0 3.08781362007 421% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6042487574 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.9259259259 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0740740741 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11111111111 5.45110844103 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220274630027 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628614284551 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567764904939 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141690975973 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466492010084 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 86.8835125448 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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