Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most important ways to improve the people’s health is to clean the environment.
No one can cast a shadow of doubt on the fact that increasing people’s health level has to do with the higher life expectancy and higher quality of life among them. Although some people believe that changing people’s eating habits is the most important factor for improving the level of hygiene in society, I firmly believe that the environmental condition is the most determinative factor for people’s health. In the following paragraphs, I will delve into the most outstanding reasons.
The first and probably foremost reason to be mentioned here is that the environment is our mother nature. whatever we eat or drink is highly depend on our environmental condition. As a matter of fact, the cleaner environment we have, the more fruitful products we can cultivate. Adversely, the environment can play an extremely disruptive role in making pathogenic disease worthen when it suffers from manifold quality problems. Rivers’ water quality could suffer drastically because of entering harmful substances such as wastewater of industries as well as sewage of houses. This polluted environment is prone to the outbreak of various numbers of viruses which could be fatal for the human.
Another reason which deserves some words here is that by polluting the environment not only are we prone to various diseases, but it also worthen our mental health in addition. Normally we go to nature around cities to relieve our stresses and make ourselves refresh to be able to live in hectic cities nowadays. But just for a second imagine that the environment has changed to a source of rubbish. Unfortunately, this nightmare has somehow become true at the present time. For example, Tehran, the capital of Iran, nowadays suffers from manifold problems such as air pollution, water pollution, soil pollution, and so forth. People nowadays cannot come out of their houses and walk even in the park because of air pollution. So they gradually become depressed when they are doomed with staying at their homes. Doctors persistently warn the government that the rate of depressing among people is increasing, owing to increasing air pollution.
To make a long story short, I believe that nowadays the most important threat to the future of human beings is the pollution of the environment, so people of a country have to clean it to avoid irreversible consequences of such an issue on their next generation as well as themselves.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 107, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Whatever
...t the environment is our mother nature. whatever we eat or drink is highly depend on our...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, then, well, as to, for example, in addition, such as, as a matter of fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2056.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 396.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19191919192 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9238487811 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55303030303 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 642.6 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8085655151 48.9658058833 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.222222222 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61111111111 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192003454217 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474496500118 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697674494707 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128926032447 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116332762012 0.0645574589148 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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