Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most people can solve important problems in their lives by themselves or with the help of their families. Help from the government is unnecessary.
Without any shadow of a doubt, people are dependent to one another and cannot live without others help either emotional aspects or living ones. In this regard, there are problems that cannot be solved by none of them alone, meaning that the presence of a beigger system is needed for helping them. Some people think that they can
cope their problems by themselves or their friend help. Others, including me, believe that if we see more general, there are some problems that will not solve by each person. Rather, it needs fundumental supports to be solved. Supports for this idea are manifold, but two of which are stated in detail hereunder.
To begin with, the majority of people all around the world are said to encounter financial problems. Most of them even do not have enough foods to eat, let alone enjoying healthy foods. Besides, there are some people that have no where no sleep. These problems although is hard to be solved, by using systematic programs as well as a general view more likely to be handled. A government may use some technical approaches when they face these problems. For example, as we can see in most of the world, in the exchange of working for the government, there are locations as well as foods that are given to these people to live. Furthermore, governments even support some of them so that their childeren go to school in order to become educated. When there are a great number of people that need these help, a single family cannot solve this problem, let alone the very family that is faced with the problem. If we be logical, people who are faced with financial problems are more likely to have families with the same problems, so they cannot even help themselves.
Moreover, there are some concepts that should be rooted in people's minds like helping handicapped as well as the old. Some people suffer from having a handicapped child in their house, however, this may be one problem that they are faced with. The most problem is that when they want to carry these ill children, other vision tend to bother them, in fact, they shy. The government help in enhancing the people's cultural level in order to reduce this negative vision is a key point for handicapped to at least do not be worry about what people think about them and how behave with them. This is, in fact, because according to the psychologists, some handicapped lose their self-confident because of these visions. In addition, governments can enjoy them some supports like building an institute for special handicapped. This will be great for them because by doing so, they can enjoy having some important facilities that make them to live better. In contrast, people alone as well as their families, cannot concentrate helping a single person just because he or she is not like the others. While inasmuch as there are more than a person in
the society, a government can shoulder their responsibility.
to sum up, with all taken into account, I do believe that although they may be some problems that people can handle them by themselves or give help from their families, some problems like critical financial supports and the problem of the handicappes are not the cases than can be solved by small families. In fact, these problems need a general view to be coped.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 228, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...esides, there are some people that have no where no sleep. These problems although...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: To
...ent can shoulder their responsibility. to sum up, with all taken into account, I ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, at least, for example, in addition, in contrast, in fact, as well as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 35.0 15.1003584229 232% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.0286738351 199% => OK
Pronoun: 68.0 43.0788530466 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 75.0 52.1666666667 144% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2715.0 1977.66487455 137% => OK
No of words: 569.0 407.700716846 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77152899824 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.88402711743 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47147420404 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.444639718805 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 848.7 618.680645161 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0795931596 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.423076923 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8846153846 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.85842293907 337% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332796683849 0.236089414692 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100709110885 0.076458572812 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0832801999307 0.0737576698707 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209696099484 0.150856017488 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043018417049 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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